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 roses edged in gold creep slowly up the black ivory banister leading to your room. melted red wax pooled at the base of each candle i laid around your head. drifting slowly through the air in milky streaks, the scent of honey twisted down the stairs and laid its lips upon my face. you're eyes like fluttering doves at dawns rise. i could see you before i even had this dream. you're nimbus of light still warm in my hands as i spun myself with grace towards you. brushing open the gauzy white drapes that enclosed your bed. the candles burned low like warm little stars. the black coils of your hair cascaded in silken waves over the pillows, framing your pale, placid face. i wanted to reach out and touch you, but instead i knelt beside you. your mouth quivered, pink. you awoke; my alabaster reverie
& just as in my dreams before this,
you closed your porcelain hands around my neck
and delicately choked me to sleep.



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On Monday April 11th, 2005, suicideseason (2161) writes:
Oh My God...Totally orgasmic...flawlessly delivered...My heart skipped a beat.From the beginning the tone was black and ominous...deliverence was not going to be offered...there was no question about that...


On Monday April 11th, 2005, suicideseason (2161) writes:
...but there was...no preparing myself for the ending...it stole my breath...pure brilliance that one could never enough of...lush imagery...I could go on for days.lol.I've read this several times...


On Monday April 11th, 2005, suicideseason (2161) writes:
...to me the structure of this resembles a mushroom cloud...beautiful,beautiful work of art.Thank you.


On Saturday October 9th, 2004, Twilight (2114) writes:
"you closed your porcelain hands around my neck and delicatly choked me to sleep. " only you, can rip the tears from my eyes. this is magnificent...how did i miss this before. i love the way you word things-you dont see it...ever.


On Sunday October 3rd, 2004, wonderlandhysteria (2195) writes:
I don't think I've ever been this much effected by a piece in my life...it's so elaborate and sultry...up until the very last line. I must favorite.


On Sunday September 26th, 2004, Revolting Theatre (38) writes:
wow


On Monday September 6th, 2004, Dayer (204) writes:
very nice imagery, & I loved the ending


On Monday September 6th, 2004, Railway_Butterfly (477) writes:
*just something about all of your writing that stands out....either way,this was beautiful..Butterfly..xxx...


On Monday September 6th, 2004, Railway_Butterfly (477) writes:
'you're eyes like fluttering doves at dawn's rise'...the structure you've used here appears somewhat different to your usual style,though theres something about this that still makes it clear that this is your work...if that makes sense...just something a


On Monday September 6th, 2004, AMIEVEEL (38) writes:
great imagery, very vivid!


On Monday September 6th, 2004, ONEANDLONELY (138) writes:
first time reader...but not the last.. i enjoyed this, especially the ending...


On Monday September 6th, 2004, Six-Out (1831) writes:
no words are around to describe how this left me...fucking amazing...not just how it's written...but the emotions, the feelings it evoked. I love it when you post, don't leave us for that long again..



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