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kissing you i tried to
imagine. replace. fireworks.
imagine. c h o k ed up.
words fleeting.
absence of dreaming. pastels.
everything fleeting and longing
for out of reach. t o uching
something like plastic for
warmth. feeling you dying when
i breathe & plastic.
my eyes seethe. & reaching
for that. c o r o n ary artery.
explosion. longing. fireworks.
warm lips
under
seranwrap.
my feelings behind, words on
the other line. b u r n me.
maybe i could
give you more plastic.
take it off mute.
read it in english. go back to
question no.1 when i answered
with my plastic. e m otions
fleeting.
bleeding red no.40.
love is like
     bleeding p l a s tic.
what am i dreaming for.
w a iting.
packaged for your convenience.
waiting for that. fireworks.


& im sorry that i look so real.






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On Saturday December 24th, 2005, ashrain (18) writes:
its like....i read this slower hoping it wouldnt end. everyword dragged...but in a fantastic way. ~ash


On Monday April 11th, 2005, suicideseason (2161) writes:
My Dear...You always express yourself in such a beautiful way...true poetry... moving...inspiring...thought provoking....amazing...makes me feel.


On Sunday October 3rd, 2004, wonderlandhysteria (2197) writes:
Demosthenes hit it on the nose...it sort of overwhelms you as you read...the grim perfection of it all.


On Wednesday May 26th, 2004, Clementine (153) writes:
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On Wednesday May 26th, 2004, Demosthenes (226) writes:
its one of the things you read fast cause its so pretty. then when you get done you read it fast again cause its so pretty.-B


On Sunday May 9th, 2004, Jonas (885) writes:
i loved a girl, polly, polly ethlene, she was everything to me and everything all at once, until her plastic pieces broke. love the love/plastic play. forlorn poetry, the perfect 4am find.


On Sunday May 2nd, 2004, Bakkhus Unbound (1119) writes:
'love is like bleeding p l a s tic.' this.is.lovely; and your style/formatting is spectactular... i like this poem a lot ...it bleeds wonderfully ...


On Saturday April 17th, 2004, Chameleon (121) writes:
This is what I love about you star...it's indescribable, but amazing.


On Friday April 16th, 2004, purr_verse (1483) writes:
wonderful conclusion to a marvellously written piece... your formatting is always compelling and distinctive, too; loved it.


On Thursday April 15th, 2004, Twilight (2114) writes:
trippy i wouldnt find to be the best word. i think its definately something of another level. your on a podium, poetry for a new era. incredible....


On Thursday April 15th, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1881) writes:
damn I dig chicks with glasses and a piercing like that.. gota move to the u.s.. ennyways . great poem. they said it. provoking and trippy


On Thursday April 15th, 2004, OLd SouL (848) writes:
very trippy.. I definitely dig it. :::OLd


On Thursday April 15th, 2004, OLd SouL (848) writes:
btw.. I love your name.


On Thursday April 15th, 2004, Lynaes (1148) writes:
I love this, how you've expressed it is so trippy quirky, and beautiful. Lovely work. -L


On Thursday April 15th, 2004, manywalks (972) writes:
I wonder if this is what a heart attack feels like to the soul. Thought provoking piece. ~ mw



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