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singed- burnt lips, & beautiful.
I ran in the night & caught the
wind under my wings.
he called for me, breathless
cold faced & anticipating.
but i was too far away to hear.
whispering. with a mute grin, stumbling towards
the sound of waves.
every thing's blue, like your eyes
when they close.

the stars are burning out.
flickering
as you turn over. in your sleep.
you always turn over.
bleeding the dream out.

even without wings, i'll fly away.
even without wings,
           i'll find you someday.

broken.the.enrapture

is this what you've worked so hard for?

maybe i wont. maybe i wont.
you cut & i stumble.
maybe i'll bleed the rest out.

close. my. eyes .x

FLASH TO:
blood splattered on the ceiling.

blush- like a thousand
pink doves ~fluttering across my cheek.
but you always turn over. /turn over.
                   & ...
i bleed from every wound.

i want to say {KISS ME}
 
 :she's come undone: they say
every great story, has its tragedy.

muse
leaving shriveled memories
that turn to dust
and sparkle in the wind.

burning like _the sky.
clouds fluxing.
                              dangerous girl.
turning up the sheets like
the sea at storm.
& you asked me if i felt faint when i saw the blood.

lips gave me their last taste of blue
*

september falls with the last bitter minutes of twilight.
your eyes open. unblinking.

and i smile, while running through the darkened streets.
scattered puddles glowing silver, then black under my feet.
the hum of the world. numb hands.

i reached out to touch your face, before i left.
your mouth was cold.
your hair hung, like lace trim }I{ around you.
sand under your fingernails
& little flecks of blood.

your wrists looked red; burned. rope still hugging.

FLASH TO: running through the rain

         FLASH TO:
red. seeping through the lines on my skin.
FLASH TO: the way my hair kept getting in my face.
FLASH TO: kissing you.


quiet.
kisses seem distant. maybe you're off thinking.
no more stars in your stare. and your dreams-
are dripping.
all over the floor.

whats that you say?
       i cant hear you.



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On Wednesday April 4th, 2007, Tania (309) writes:
such talent.. amazing and beautiful.


On Wednesday July 12th, 2006, An Expired Member (3) writes:
Beautiful write


On Thursday August 11th, 2005, blue (1749) writes:
*head swimming* This has more meaning to me than you could know.. I am at once speechless and awakened to thought! Thank you. ~b


On Thursday August 11th, 2005, Railway_Butterfly (464) writes:
and secondly because I came here wanting to let this piece spill over me.. and now I have, I feel the need to tell you again how beautiful and moving this piece is.. but I don't think theres any more I could say that I haven't already..


On Thursday August 11th, 2005, Railway_Butterfly (464) writes:
I hate that I was the last person to comment on this. For two reasons. One.. because it should be read by every single member on this site. And more. Over and over..


On Wednesday April 27th, 2005, Railway_Butterfly (464) writes:
I'm still hopelessly in love with this piece.


On Tuesday April 19th, 2005, An Expired Member (6) writes:
amazing... wonderful imagery. I loved it... its going on my favs ~*Serena*~


On Sunday November 28th, 2004, blue (1749) writes:
I'll never be amazed at how some people can take a thought and carry it so far! Applause! I bow to you. B


On Sunday October 3rd, 2004, evolve (2229) writes:
Wow. The way this evolved...into the piece that it is...it's just astounding to watch your words move.


On Thursday September 16th, 2004, An Expired Member (18) writes:
...it's made me spee-TYPE-less.


On Monday August 16th, 2004, An Expired Member (9) writes:
"no more stars in your stare. and your dreams- are dripping"...such a great line. I love the imagery of the whole piece...really clear and clean in each line


On Sunday April 11th, 2004, WinterGrave (337) writes:
most enjoyable read, i loved it.~~~Grave


On Sunday March 28th, 2004, flying_fox (769) writes:
I really like the storyboard-type format... such vivid images. The opening stanza had my mind running free and feeling wonderful, and you so effectively changed this around as I continued to read. Amazing work. Fox


On Saturday March 20th, 2004, Bella Butchery (1143) writes:
kisses and murder... i think you are really talented, and you inspire me everytime i read your work to cut deep with my words... i love you <3


On Wednesday March 3rd, 2004, Bakkhus Unbound (1108) writes:
'the darkened streets. scattered puddles glowing silver, then black under my feet. the hum of the world. numb hands.' FLASH TO: 'no more stars in your stare.' cinematic. divine chop cut film-edit feel. flow. perfect juxtoposed rhythm. in numb winds.


On Wednesday March 3rd, 2004, Bakkhus Unbound (1108) writes:
FLASH TO: 'burning like _the sky. clouds fluxing. dangerous girl.' hummms... beautiful. wet glitter. like television w/ soul. '& little flecks of blood.'


On Tuesday March 2nd, 2004, Six-Out (1824) writes:
Dear god....you always leave me...just unable to think. Astounding.


On Tuesday March 9th, 2004, Demosthenes (222) writes:
what he said. *has no words, as usual* -B


On Tuesday March 2nd, 2004, Bast (896) writes:
lovely as always...


On Tuesday March 2nd, 2004, Wish Upon A Star (385) writes:
The images I get from reading this are stunning. "your dreams- are dripping. all over the floor." All your works make for amazing reading. ~Wish Upon A Star


On Tuesday March 2nd, 2004, purr_verse (1437) writes:
beautiful; as Twilight said, passionate...intensely so... I love the filmic qualities woven throughout; the visuals rendered so vivid. fabulous work. purr


On Wednesday March 3rd, 2004, Bakkhus Unbound (1108) writes:
'love the filmic qualities woven throughout; the visuals rendered so visual.' my. how you make readiNg comments like film paintings & poetry... you iNspire me. drowned.


On Tuesday March 2nd, 2004, Twilight (2102) writes:
wow this leaves me speechless. truly passionate and interesting at the same time. very well done.



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