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don't you remember the taste
and the way the edge of day
broke over your . . .:: wrist like
some
fire ignited in your veins.
releasing bloodlust and brimstone.
cascading in crimson streaks, thick and delicate and beautiful.
forcing the s c r e a m s out of you
with my hands
clasped around your ~slender neck.
so delicate.
the black tendrils of your hair
were soaked in blood.
your

 cold


      skin
the color of dove wings.

red nightfall
inching over you're lips
like the shadows of lust
at sunset.

i breathed great swells of steam into the night air.
& you,
so perfect in your sleep..
weeping tears like
shattered glass against the pale of your cheek.
you dreamed for me.
as the waves licked the sand and somewhere

over the azure abyss

     where the sky meets the sea..


it waits.

and i can taste the dream under your s k i n
you're so beautiful when you hurt
for me
when you're hair falls
just
that
way:::

things could never be the same. i saw you and everything inside me knew.
when you walked away. i hope you're dream is lovely. i hope its everything
you wanted it to be. i hope you never sleep.
when you're eyes fall on me
just
that
way:::

i'll kiss you're eyelids for the last time
and whisper
you
to sleep. just that way. dreamdreamdreamdream
                                                              dream dream d r e a m. . .

crushed shells lying by the shore.
never to be whole.
and i, shattered look upon the waves like little wishes
broken by the land.

you're hands are soft and wet.
and i smile at your eyelids, closed for the last time.
colors pooling in the sand. the sound. rushing.
rushing.
and i told you i would give you something special.


its cold now

but you

are calm.

f o r e ver


      ..::: dreaming.



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On Tuesday February 6th, 2007, Anna Helianthus (1162) writes:
you have such a unique style. i should have faved you long ago. so goddamn brilliant, this is.


On Sunday October 31st, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (586) writes:
beautiful.. truly, from your first words, to your last.. well done..


On Sunday October 3rd, 2004, evolve (2232) writes:
You are the Queen of violent poetry...I make vast attempts at this magnificence...simply astounding.


On Friday October 1st, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (586) writes:
"red nightfall inching over you're lips like the shadows of lust at sunset".. loved this, very good write, i really like your style


On Saturday September 25th, 2004, Dayer (201) writes:
this is perfect writing. I loved everything about this


On Tuesday June 8th, 2004, Railway_Butterfly (464) writes:
..so perfectly placed..Butterfly..xxx...


On Tuesday June 8th, 2004, Railway_Butterfly (464) writes:
...'so perfect in your sleep weeping tears like glass against the plae of your cheek you dreamed for me.as the waves licked the sand and somewhere over the azure abyss where the sky meets the sea..it waits'...wow....and I thought the ending was fantastic.


On Tuesday June 8th, 2004, Railway_Butterfly (464) writes:
...fucking hell..this is just..astounding.Completely.So...artistic..every word just seemed to pour over me and I had to read this over and over again...


On Wednesday September 24th, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm (693) writes:
Very haunting and well done - I especially loved the lines "so perfect in your sleep.. weeping tears like shattered glass against the pale of your cheek. you dreamed for me. as the waves licked the sand and somewhere". Ciao, T/S


On Friday September 12th, 2003, Chameleon (120) writes:
oh my god...SPOOKY! I can't beleive it! Everyone went changing their names and its taken me this long to find everyone again. Love this, as always- your back on my favs; rightfully so.


On Thursday September 11th, 2003, manywalks (950) writes:
Intense, this just jammed its way into my mind and refused to budge, excellent. ~ mw


On Wednesday September 10th, 2003, Nightmare (26) writes:
Wow.. I am astonished by this write, I love it. - Lee ^_^


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Well, la de fucking da! Star girl, this is one maglificant piece. You make me twiddle in my jimmies. Super duper cool write.


On Wednesday September 10th, 2003, braindeadpoet (127) writes:
Great peice....very powerful---jer


On Wednesday September 10th, 2003, slow.burn.star (97) writes:
aww -love-


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Absolutely stunning....made feel, smell, see and hear your words...I am speechless, You've done a great job, needless to say-


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That was awsome. Never quite read anything like this before. I loved it...


On Wednesday September 10th, 2003, Demosthenes (222) writes:
well. youre still a god. -B



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