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Keep dreaming what dreams may come,

drowning slow,

Dreaming of dreams yet to be done,

as we go,

As if a man could ever fathom or see,
What sensations or real dreams could ever be,

god looked down on us today,
The day the world forgot to pray,

And drowned us in his self pity,

The day the world
exploded,
imploded,
degraded, sufficiently seperated from the degenerated, belated, procrastinated population inhabiting the mezzanine of the world unseen,
was the day you scraping, mis-shapen, groveling, begging, pleading, bleeding, got down on both knees and started screaming.
Keeping dreaming what dreams may come,
Dreaming of dreams yet to be done,
As if a man could ever fathom or see,
What sensations or real dreams could ever be,
god looked down on us today,
The day the world forgot to pray,

And drowned us in his self pity,



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On Sunday December 3rd, 2006, An Expired Member (27) writes:
his was beautifully written, the way you repeated the beginning at the end... all the more splended. i like your style


On Sunday November 5th, 2006, Gold Dust Woman (170) writes:
like a bedtime lullaby, mind opening, i like it.... alot! loved it. it had a great sucker punch at the end


On Wednesday June 14th, 2006, BrokenButterflyWings (31) writes:
this sounds really familiar, I think u used part from your old stuff… I remember hearing u sing this… I still like it : )


On Friday May 26th, 2006, gbuff69 (212) writes:
it's tender and sad, mind-opening.


On Tuesday May 23rd, 2006, Vicious Pixie (52) writes:
Gentle lulling start with a punch in the face finish...loved it


On Tuesday May 23rd, 2006, MindHavoc (3) writes:
Excellent wordplay always leaves a reader with intrigue and desire. Desire to do more for themself.


On Tuesday May 23rd, 2006, dp_whipping_girl (406) writes:
leaves me speechless; quite a powerful write to do so; ~pf


On Monday May 22nd, 2006, Zen (629) writes:
more than g-r-e-a-t.


On Monday May 22nd, 2006, Zen (629) writes:
that was ...great?



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