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Its not about sex, its about power
the slow lead into explosive murder
the sensual sachrine mindblowing

god crushing... fuck

Its not about making love ... It's about taking love
about endless passion staring back at you because
they're so crushed and broken by the impact of the insatiated demon
this engraving on their soul
this thing that caters only to their sex
this fuck
this whore, this monster, this love...

It's not about motion, It's about rythym
the precision beat of adrenaline lust rush
the cataclysmic barrage of bare bodied bodies
slamming their truth into eachothers lies
cleaning the sin

its not about religion, it's about jesus christ
It's about making her forget his name

It's not about rape, it's about her having no choice

its about being inside to erase the begging sick in your head
erasing the scribbles of society enforced media suicide
with every thrust and push and break and bleed
It's not about insatiable want, It's about insanitys need

It's not about cumming, it's about being inside
it's about the walls giving in around you
because they can't handle the raucious ravage ride
Its' about god fuck jesus christ heroine sup suicide
and about not caring if you live through it
as long as you cross to the other side

It's about the crash, and the burn
about fucking so hard it hurts
about becoming one
about being one

it's not about me, or you
it's about creating one
from destroying two








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On Thursday January 17th, 2008, xserratedsoulx (276) writes:
LOVE the last stanza.


On Thursday November 8th, 2007, Kui (730) writes:
Holy fuck! Fan-fucking-tastic! Amazing Explicit write.-Airi


On Thursday October 18th, 2007, Zen (625) writes:
so that means. i'm touched? or something gay like that. but i CAN'T get ths out of my mind. and i should know. i've been trying for months.


On Thursday October 18th, 2007, Zen (625) writes:
fucking. and here i am again. whatever you want to call it, this this has a huge impact on me. and right now it's the only thing i'm thinking about. i remember this and think of it sometimes even tho i read this a long time ago.


On Tuesday June 12th, 2007, Lolita (121) writes:
Oh my goodness-- That was a bit explicit. ^_^ Very nice, though. My favourite was the final stanza.


On Wednesday February 14th, 2007, Sin (1639) writes:
God damn! this was fucking fabulous! the words pulsed right off the page and so many killer lines i couldnt quote one if i tried..i wish i had room on my favorites for this *tips hat* ~kristy


On Saturday January 27th, 2007, Zen (625) writes:
holy fucking shit. this is amazing and i know exactly what your talking about..well from the other end anyway. and i was going to say something else but i restrained myself. good-day sir.


On Thursday November 16th, 2006, Army Barbie (493) writes:
Holy shit this is sexy...as I'm eating my crackers and drinking an eggnogg milk shake. I feel compelled to hit the bed and take someone with me though, love it.


On Tuesday November 14th, 2006, Mylissa (1071) writes:
I have commented on this piece and you are right I DO LOVE it...your words are so passionate.


On Friday June 16th, 2006, virginalnympho (24) writes:
amazing. i think i fell in love with every word... and i don't even believe in love...


On Friday June 16th, 2006, flying_fox (769) writes:
a great write... the malevolence behind the words is rivetting, I particularly liked 'it's not about religion, it's about Jesus Christ, it's about making her forget his name'. Awesome lines.


On Friday June 16th, 2006, Fornever_Never (255) writes:
Thank you so much ... I think I need to go play with myself now ... and refer you to read touch me ( on my page ) .. to make you do the same thing


On Friday May 19th, 2006, MindRape (878) writes:
wow! I am in awe of your obvius talent in this piece. I love this!


On Tuesday May 16th, 2006, The Fool (1001) writes:
holy fuck I'm never going to be the same after reading this, this is just life altering.


On Tuesday May 16th, 2006, Kinkypoptart (765) writes:
wow... *leaves to take a shower* Great write ~*~Tart~*~


On Tuesday May 16th, 2006, The Fool (1001) writes:
*shivers* this was just incredible and damnable hehe* I need a cold shower* this was just over powering and made you just well... go crazy


On Saturday April 22nd, 2006, BrokenButterflyWings (31) writes:
you know its hot and I love it =) So much more to say about it, but I will leave it with: I especially like the sweet part at the end...


On Monday April 10th, 2006, Vicious Pixie (52) writes:
...it's not about me, or you it's about creating one from destroying two... violent, passionate,raw...this makes me want to stop breathing


On Monday April 10th, 2006, evolve (2293) writes:
..read as if collapsing mind-stems to mouth, a deafening crash.. bit my tongue and held it as a whispered retort to screams in my head. fiercely penned.


On Monday April 10th, 2006, Muse (82) writes:
ohmy im madly in love. *faves*


On Monday April 10th, 2006, Mylissa (1071) writes:
Simply beautiful! A insane masterpiece...I think we shall call it beautifully insane...


On Sunday April 9th, 2006, mozarts cat (270) writes:
completely speechless .. you have a brilliant way of conveying things .. 'it's not about making love ... it's about taking love' .. brilliant line =)


On Sunday April 9th, 2006, An Expired Member (52) writes:
this was fucking amazing, I am in love with this poem, this was a roller coaster and the thrust was powerful- I admire ur talent and the guts to bare naked the hunger within...excellent!! ~sinful~


On Sunday April 9th, 2006, edenscancer (46) writes:
thanks for the comments!


On Sunday April 9th, 2006, elisa (2020) writes:
pounding consciousness into oblivion........ fucking even the dust into nothing...... then swallowing the nothing into 'never' ............a cherry of a title, btw


On Sunday April 9th, 2006, gbuff69 (211) writes:
it's not about making love, it's about taking love.... I'm looking for more BRING IT ON gina



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