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jack.hammered [dys]topia by Cassandra
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jack.hammered [dys]topia

~ Cassandra ~

acknowledgement of insecurities tied to empty wishes and blank hopes
are invented for the sole purpose of interior destruction rather than design
eternal phobias are locked away in oblivious zones - blackened glances and poisoned lips
shards of frictional mirrors conflicting scarlet against obsidian in the gaze of death
havoc spat in vodka from jackhammered sockets now carved
[lets play cage the bird all over again]


entwining porcelain fingers with sweat veiled mood rings and pinky promises
miserable and overwhelmed with a lustful shadow of vengeful tequilla sunsets
kissing a horizon of forest fire and vanilla mosquitoes to enhance unseen beauty
until everything you once found cherished as a stunning or gorgeous possession
conflicted with an oceanic brutality unnoticed: salted pavement
[flutter, flutter, flutter, .c.r.a.s.h.]


magnified regrets stripped of cause {black} and effect {white} depart leaving behind
a dystopia recycled into a cesspool of candy lies and tagged bungee cords
washed into a monochrome abyss with nature's bitter glory chipping taste buds
carressing a tongue sliced into sixths and nurturing white polaroids simultaneously
manipulating the self-made hypocrites of modern standards until they are shackled with tears

[s t u c k, c.r.a.s.h, s t u c k]
[c.r.a.s.h, s t u c k, c.r.a.s.h]
[s t u c k, c.r.a.s.h, s t u c k]

---x---x----x----x-----x-----x------x------

and you [DIE] again.
.for
..the
...thousandth
....time.

© 2006 Cassandra Day
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  • saintedmad On Wednesday, June 10, 2009, saintedmad (1420) wrote:

    the slithering stutter within this..the stop.st.ill words and power.lines......aesthetics alone this is so wonder.full. must endeavour to read more of your work.

  • Bella Butchery On Wednesday, May 23, 2007, Bella Butchery (947) wrote:

    i am so happy i came across this..... why did you stop posting? we need more writes like this.

  • verablue On Wednesday, October 25, 2006, verablue (139) wrote:

    your word choice in impeccable! a brilliant read!

  • Equinox Asylum On Saturday, April 1, 2006, Equinox Asylum (152) wrote:

    One word...prodigy.

  • Shadow Rapture On Sunday, March 26, 2006, Shadow Rapture (203) wrote:

    You have a precocious talent that belies your years.I relish your offerings, wonderful imagery, deep and articulate for your age - WOWWW!!!

  • dying angel On Sunday, March 26, 2006, dying angel (1076) wrote:

    i love reading your writes. they're so full of beauty in the most sophistocated way. your words flow so magically...

  • Anna Helianthus On Sunday, March 26, 2006, Anna Helianthus (972) wrote:

    i really like your style..it's very intelligent with unique and lovely wordings. "lustful shadow of vengeful tequilla sunsets" i loved the images i got in this poem..just wonderful.

  • mozarts cat On Sunday, March 26, 2006, mozarts cat (239) wrote:

    beautiful write .. made my heart beat quicken ~V


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