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Tomorrow Started

Apathy betrays you
Your actions delay you
Regret comsumes all hope in you
You spend the time you borrowed on foolish make believe
You make love with hate
Tomorrow started
All is rape

Tainted blood fills the fire lake
Life has lost it's gravity
This is the day of suffering

Black and blue and shades of gray
Serrated edges carve a comatose haze
Broken souls fly on altered wings
With riot witches over dreadful things
Charming devils sodomize your gash
And you embrace denial, to avoid the victim trial
You need to masturbate
Tomorrow started
All is rape

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On Thursday November 23rd, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2404) writes:

you're really missed Troy, I hope and would love to see you come back and dazzle me with some writes man...dammit!!!

On Wednesday May 10th, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2404) writes:

riot witches - sound like my neighbours! About the masturbation thing...a voice in my head told me to do it..sorry.

On Thursday November 23rd, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2404) writes:

berk!!

On Monday May 1st, 2006, An Expired Member (29) writes:

what can i say? nothing that can desribe this.beautifully song-like. i want to sing now...-silver

On Monday May 1st, 2006, The Fool (1002) writes:

This was just really....I don't know how to explain it but it rocked my socks off, with your words that tainted the mind

On Friday April 28th, 2006, dying angel (1340) writes:

i really liked the title and so far i like all of your writes. great write. keep them coming.

On Thursday April 27th, 2006, Ainsof (1838) writes:

wild opposition within a consistent and calm rhyme... a frenzy of ideas tearing at each other within a structure undaunted by the fray

On Thursday April 27th, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1160) writes:

your one of the only poets i know that can astound me with rhyme..usually i don't like it, and theres only a few that can keep me interested..but you use a perfect amout of imagery, and none of the rhyme feels forced. your amazing, troy.

On Thursday April 27th, 2006, An Expired Member (10) writes:

different...im still unsure of what it talks about (it doesnt usually hit me right then and there). but i really like it. the style is different. nice write ~~Jessica~~

On Wednesday April 26th, 2006, mywristshurt (524) writes:

wow... this is something new.. something gothic new, but cool... i like it

On Wednesday April 26th, 2006, Muse (82) writes:

i do so love your distorted view. its like gazing at one of those classic lamenting paintings

On Wednesday April 26th, 2006, An Expired Member (60) writes:

i love it! very ironic nice

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