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Hover

Butterflying blindly to reach heaven fast,
I swim past a silver lining.

My blue sky will not rain emotion,
So I wait in vain for anyone
to throw me a halo ocean.

Until that day,
I hover,
Endlessly, I hover...

(repost for Bethany)

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On Monday June 25th, 2007, deadrosesrdust (142) writes:

i did like it the the 2nd paragraph is gr8

On Saturday April 7th, 2007, carlosjackal (1608) writes:

"halo ocean"....:} Wish I'd thought of that image first. An altogether great emotive write -Carl

On Thursday November 23rd, 2006, Magic Hatter (2383) writes:

god damn classic!!!

On Sunday November 19th, 2006, SamoneDrone (410) writes:

beautiul. i love your symbolism. blue skies, silver linings, oceans; great. ....-samone

On Sunday November 19th, 2006, mozarts cat (271) writes:

one of my favourites of yours .. when are you coming back Troy?!?!

On Thursday November 23rd, 2006, Magic Hatter (2383) writes:

*weeps*...damn right

On Monday July 3rd, 2006, TropicalSnowstorm (696) writes:

I enjoyed this piece very much - glad you reposted it. Love the visuals. Ciao, T/S

On Friday June 2nd, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1165) writes:

i will never, ever get tired of this poem. i actually wrote it down in my journal when you reposted it, and since i take my journal with me pretty much everywhere, this is always with me. endlessly, i will love this...

On Friday July 13th, 2007, Baron Von Dark (153) writes:

Sorry it took a year to thank you for loving this write, but I have been gone a long time. Thanx Beth.

On Wednesday May 10th, 2006, Magic Hatter (2383) writes:

I will hover with you as my halo is floating off and I need to retrieve it for ai am about to sin.Several times in fact.And not always with the same woman!

On Sunday November 19th, 2006, mozarts cat (271) writes:

......

On Monday May 1st, 2006, mywristshurt (530) writes:

i wish Bethany would have written more... i also wish she would put a little more rhyme to it.. otherwise, its just okay for me

On Tuesday May 16th, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1165) writes:

what the hell?

On Monday May 22nd, 2006, Collective Amnesia (251) writes:

seriously....what the hell????? ~Tamara

On Monday May 1st, 2006, The Fool (1048) writes:

This was just incredible~!

On Tuesday April 25th, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1165) writes:

thank you. :D

On Tuesday April 25th, 2006, An Expired Member (29) writes:

i can hear this as a song. i love how you write. beautifully wistful.-silver

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