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"As Beautiful As These Moments Are...Their Evil When Their Gone.." by waterchica999

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As we sit here
holding our tattered hands
I wonder what you did wrong to deserve this,
as our eyes flood our faces,
I can not think straight,
This time it was different
like nothing that could ever have been promised,
now as you slowly die,
I remember this step,
you are not the last to leave
those horrible footsteps across my breast,
I've learned to say Hello,
yet the Good bye's always seem
to get stuck in my chest
as the time grows near
I start to breathe Ice,
not wanting this pain
that bleeds in my veins,
your not even gone and I miss you so much...
Now the bird chimes from the witches tower
and they sing
our last hour....




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On Thursday July 27th, 2006, mywristshurt (511) writes:
it caught my breath as i was reading this.. i mean, i figured out when i was done, i wasn't breathing.. that's how good it was.. i mean, to think your love is dieing is one thing, but then to watch them die is a complete other.. and you made it specific i


On Thursday July 27th, 2006, mywristshurt (511) writes:
in this poem... i think thats why i liked it so much


On Thursday July 27th, 2006, BroKen-GlaSSHeArT (97) writes:
oh my god this is absolutely amazing, i could barely breathe.


On Thursday July 27th, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2401) writes:
urinating eyes on our faces? Hmm...odd line, a bit out of place in thi for me, strange post...


On Friday July 28th, 2006, waterchica999 (38) writes:
yea ur right it didn't fit


On Wednesday July 26th, 2006, waterchica999 (38) writes:
it refers to those sweet moments you get rarely their so beautiful yet hurt so much when u know u can't ever have that one again...


On Wednesday July 26th, 2006, SamoneDrone (400) writes:
"They're" Evil When "They're" Gone?



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