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"The One Who's Lit The Way..." by waterchica999

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I'm so lost without you
but you will never know
you are my guide in the forest of the night
lighting my way
so different from the rest
Like a seer from above
you've collected my thoughts
no way to figure you out
yet I've collected all your pieces
You've been everything to me
and yet its not enough
Let me teach you the ways
as you have taught me
so much to say
yet my words have just escape
as i picture your dark eyes
I almost want to cry
the very thought of losing
My teacher and my friend
I hope it will be ok in the end...


© 2006 Frozen Rose

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On Monday July 17th, 2006, dying angel (1307) writes:
"You've been everything to me and yet its not enough"....this was sad but very well written.


On Sunday July 16th, 2006, TwilightMelodies (1041) writes:
The fact that I can relate to this one-hundred percent is still nothing that would tell you how deeply this affected me. It's as if you placed a mirror before me and allowed me to look inside myself in a way I've never before been able to. ~*Beth*~


On Saturday July 15th, 2006, mywristshurt (511) writes:
i can't say it's my favorite.. but i did like it. there was just something in there that i couldn't grasp.. maybe if i read this some other day (w/ out so much shit on my mind) i will appreciate it more.. its still a good write thou


On Saturday July 15th, 2006, Fading_Smile (58) writes:
whoa. when this light is gone, how will you find your way? i really liked this one, meant a lot to me. nice!



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