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Even the blind see

She closed her eyes trying to
determine the sins of her actions
while finding her inner being
and trying not to corrupt the world
with her evil being
but once inside
she found more then pain,
then hate,
then the beaten girl
who can't let go
and the soul who apologizes
once to much
and plasters a smile that never reaches
her once alive beautiful eyes
Then She opened her eyes and saw
Nothing had changed...

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On Friday September 28th, 2007, What Limes (170) writes:

nice write. Your title gives too much away though... if that makes any sense, or if you even wanted feedback.

On Friday September 28th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2401) writes:

plus the fact it's the Stanley Kubrick film title sort of impedes it...you might consider using " " to at least acknowledge, so as to avoid confusion...maybe? Or to separate from it....dunno

On Saturday September 29th, 2007, waterchica999 (38) writes:

thanks, I'm always looking for feedback eyes wide shut was all i could think of at the time but ur right and i like this one better

On Sunday September 30th, 2007, What Limes (170) writes:

well played...

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