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3cigarettes+silentprayer.

tonight
i talked to god.

he said:

dont think
just kiss.

dont feel
just touch.

dont love
just fuck.

and in silent prayer
we have the nerve to ask why.

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On Tuesday January 9th, 2007, Instant Insanity (754) writes:

hate it.. ][ ][

On Thursday July 27th, 2006, GreyDividing (201) writes:

Such a cold resolution...like an icy stomp to the face. Feels like god is staring you straight in the eyes while he's running you through. Be careful what you say to someone, you might kill them. LOL!

On Friday July 7th, 2006, An Expired Member (18) writes:

so short, yet so powerful...nice

On Thursday June 22nd, 2006, capt_funguy (999) writes:

god sees fit to add another three commandments - god chooses you to spread the word - ... and in silent prayer i tell him ..." good choice " ---- god endorsed live now alternatives -

On Thursday June 22nd, 2006, capt_funguy (999) writes:

i pondered this little gem for half an hour ... thanks twi' ... funguy

On Monday June 19th, 2006, Ainsof (1831) writes:

wow.. if only to be that guiding hand... haha this impales and resurrects in one fatal blow... powerful enough to be heresy, perhaps, thanks!

On Monday June 19th, 2006, saintedmad (1169) writes:

this actually startled me in places; made my heart gasp in both shock and awe and honesty.. .. and with an intrepidating last breath...... powerful statement, but makes me feel rather powerless too. awesome write

On Monday June 19th, 2006, PoeticHellion (250) writes:

Wow. THat was amazing.

On Monday June 19th, 2006, Astra Dei (644) writes:

*falls on floor and lays there*

On Monday June 19th, 2006, AniDayz (1281) writes:

. . .excellent. . .

On Monday June 19th, 2006, Bakkhus Unbound (1108) writes:

"we have the nerve to ask why." Speculative & real. I like this...

On Monday June 19th, 2006, Michelle Xiao (507) writes:

Brilliant disbelief, can't help but provoke the natural skeptic in us all.

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