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I Wrote This From Inside Her Eyes

I want a house

With windows draped in blood. With walls papered with the skins of innocent victims. I want anguish and anticipation awaiting me in every corridor. I want doors that slam in the face of oppurtunity. and walls that are built around me to keep me free. I want a patio equipped with parasols of deception. Soils that seeth the rebirth of self destruction. I want plumbing that streams heartbreak and pain through each and every cavity. I want a library of books without substance or prupose. No wisdom to provide. This is my want-my passion. My preliminary notion...that with dreams like these-what can possibly go wrong?

Enough's enough to know you never really had enough.

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On Sunday June 8th, 2008, carlosjackal (1598) writes:

Superbly macabre.

On Friday January 18th, 2008, xserratedsoulx (284) writes:

LOVE it.

On Wednesday May 9th, 2007, An Expired Member (24) writes:

There is poetry in despair... I loved this!

On Friday March 30th, 2007, Clementine (153) writes:

was it mucus-y?

On Sunday March 25th, 2007, Enigma (127) writes:

Amazing, great description and wow can you write....still loving your work..

On Saturday July 22nd, 2006, xserratedsoulx (284) writes:

that last line, about dreams...mmmmmmmm...darling, you amaze me.

On Wednesday August 31st, 2005, FlashDark (25) writes:

super amazing...very nice write...cynical sarcasm...how can you ever go wrong with that...jbc

On Tuesday August 30th, 2005, An Expired Member (33) writes:

This really twisted and a brand new form of writing.Starting off simplistic and then going into great description I like this alot

On Friday January 28th, 2005, manunkind (89) writes:

i love this!!!! i cant say i think it's beautiful, but its twisted and a brand new idea (as far as i can tell)...awesome write!!

On Sunday December 19th, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (589) writes:

i liked how you started off with a simple thought "I want a house" and went into this amazing description. with some strong ass imagery. . and the ending, just gave my heart that final punch. . awesome piece.

On Friday July 16th, 2004, anth (1622) writes:

that mr king commentsounds more like mr T ...lol jokin, hes right though, always something deeper spoken of in your works

On Friday July 16th, 2004, Mr King (624) writes:

what a fool wants... what a fool needs... you write for the fool who sees not his own foolish ways... i see angry dark resignation... perhaps some fool in you... perhaps in me too

On Thursday July 29th, 2004, Twilight (2114) writes:

yeah im a fool. but hey, whatever works for the mother, will slowly torture its pure and innocent offspring.

On Wednesday July 14th, 2004, -Oz- (176) writes:

wow...what a picture that enters my mind with this one..nice -Oz

On Sunday July 11th, 2004, suicideseason (2161) writes:

_*shakes head* i love you,Twi...the picture that you painted is vivid enough to have a coroner disgorging yesterdays breakfast...when is enough ever enough?awesome as always.my sexy muse never lets me down.:)

On Saturday July 10th, 2004, Lynaes (1148) writes:

anth nailed it.. Spectacular indeed.. the metaphor through the rich and savage wording was incredible and original.. "With windows draped in blood.

On Saturday July 10th, 2004, Lynaes (1148) writes:

With walls papered with the skins of innocent victims" this chewed me up and left me lingering.. fantastic work twi, just, incredible

On Saturday July 10th, 2004, capt_funguy (1006) writes:

irony as catostrophic weapon ... metaphor as a time elapse explosive ... we are what we surround ourselves with .. we are the skins we choose ... you hold a bloody heart in your hand ... amazing twi' ... funguy

On Saturday July 10th, 2004, anth (1622) writes:

spectacular,the metaphor of the feeling of this is a superb idea,executed with clinical precision.superbly expressed the imagery and meaning,style and words of this are something to marvel at

On Saturday July 10th, 2004, Evil (551) writes:

dude..this was fucking awesome. "I want plumbing that streams heartbreak and pain through each and every cavity." the descriptions in this are to die for. i have a need to take this for my own. thank you, so much. love you.

On Friday July 9th, 2004, K_Love (701) writes:

Beautifully written. The imagery in this is priceless I loved it. ~Kirsten~

On Friday July 9th, 2004, Syn (83) writes:

*speechless* wow -Syn

On Tuesday November 9th, 2004, Twilight (2114) writes:

my god this is horrible.

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