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"Blacktop Delirium(By Streetlight I Retreat)" by Twilight

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Horizontal scriptures on the horizon
Futurist images-and damning curses
For moments of envy-eyes rolling in your head
Anger rising-patience passive
Walking upon scorching blacktops-eyes focus upon deep details
I though tof you while examining its cracking-its flaws
You crossed my mind-
As i mercilessly beat my head against the curb
I felt your presence graze my cheek as it bled plasmatic red
In the event that your affliction should penetrate
Puncture me to purity-and slash this rational disaster
Dew dropped dreamsin ruin-now left, a burden below
Replying with indication detonation
Stop light mentality-clock blocking paranoia
A soft verticordian concience-manipulation enter>>
Present premonition-avoiding reason
Alternation of mindstates-she loves you, she loves you not
Place all of our prevailance under surveillance
And retreat the progress of prosperity
While trading fear for relevance
Though the feeling is fining with age
We capture acceptance-and depart from our eyes contact



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On Thursday May 27th, 2004, nesbia (22) writes:
lovely


On Monday June 21st, 2004, anth (1611) writes:
the first 9 lines just so shocking in the scene created in my mind,like from a movie,yet so much deeper.incredible


On Tuesday May 25th, 2004, Mute Serenade (216) writes:
your wordplay is sensational twi, such a wonderful poem... Sue


On Sunday May 23rd, 2004, GreekPhilosopher (181) writes:
Im Just Gonna Say Yes Please And Then Some. GPhD


On Saturday May 22nd, 2004, capt_funguy (999) writes:
it's like you've discovered how to melt the words , and bend and twist them to do what you want ... you are on fire twi' ... thats the explanation


On Saturday May 22nd, 2004, capt_funguy (999) writes:
creation , meets expression ... fuckin' slammin' .... funguy


On Saturday May 22nd, 2004, Daemonicus (639) writes:
perfect words for what im seeing too... your work is to be flashed past... or deeply explored... wild stuff from an amazing mind! still... wishing the my twi could have love's .... :( *big hug* someone'll see sense one day! *looks at airfares to america*


On Saturday May 22nd, 2004, Daemonicus (639) writes:
haha :)


On Tuesday May 25th, 2004, Twilight (2102) writes:
:( such saddness...i misss deeeeeeeeemon


On Saturday May 22nd, 2004, Mistress Morbid (594) writes:
Interesting....heart-felt indeed. Lovely words you have used to create a much disturbing picture. -Morb


On Friday May 21st, 2004, The Fallen Angel (289) writes:
trance-pandemonium trippy and complex+fallen one+


On Friday May 21st, 2004, Lynaes (1129) writes:
Oh wow. this was so intense, in it's depth and intricate, beautiful wording. Reading this, I felt like I understood, and absorbed the passion you've put into this. Gorgeous, astounding work Twi, a style that is so amazing and unique to you. ~L


On Friday May 21st, 2004, sixsixnine (492) writes:
very cool pice keep writing man you've got something deep & trippy just the way i like it*669*


On Friday May 21st, 2004, anth (1611) writes:
yay i was hoping this was your work when i saw the title, i so love these kind of writes by you, the imagery and style bombard my mind and attack my senses with mechanical aggression and robotic precision,


On Friday May 21st, 2004, anth (1611) writes:
everylines just amazes me, just so ubercool and deep, another to go on my faves, this is total brilliance



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