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This Morning I Found This Written On The Sunset

Aphrodite on cyprus island
Tripping through her book of casualties
[His name] [Her name] [Your name] [My name]
Venus accompanies her in their fit of laughter
Watching painstaking moments play before their masochist eyes
Just watching the enforcings of their own inner workings
Brings them pleasure-in envy i watched them take control
I watch them take my eyes-and make them see whats not there

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On Sunday December 19th, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (586) writes:

"I watch them take my eyes-and make them see whats not there". . despite the short length of this, this proves the line "its quality not quantity" to be true. . honestly, I'm completely dumbfounded, left in awe. . wow .

On Monday July 26th, 2004, Northstar (455) writes:

this one gives me chills--you definitely captivate the imagination in your works--I love the last line "I watch them take my eyes-and make them see whats not there"

On Saturday May 22nd, 2004, capt_funguy (999) writes:

woderful departure ... stumbling across gargantuas playing badmitton with our existence ... way cool ... funguy

On Thursday May 27th, 2004, Twilight (2102) writes:

thanks capt, your words mean so much at times like these.

On Friday May 21st, 2004, suicideseason (2144) writes:

_oh,Twilight...you sexy maiden,you... with so many works of yours i feel like you're talking to me...like it's just you and me...and we're sharing a scream at the sky...this is one of them...and that makes no sense...

On Thursday May 20th, 2004, GreekPhilosopher (181) writes:

So Short Yet Fully Expressed. This One Was Great. The Philosopher Approves Very Much! GPhD.

On Friday May 21st, 2004, Twilight (2102) writes:

thank you so much greek, i really respect your opinion...

On Thursday May 20th, 2004, BleedSilver (373) writes:

Not many comments on this...I like your shorter ones, too...The point is thrown across right away, and your piece is understood right away. Love it. ~Mikey

On Wednesday May 19th, 2004, Lynaes (1129) writes:

oh wow, this was such a beautiful imaginative take, and so true! There does always seem to be unseen hands twisting and complicating things for us, and it's cruel, but this is exactly what it feels like. Beautiful work :) -L

On Tuesday May 18th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (594) writes:

Hell yeah! This was fucking awesome. You rock Twi! -Morb

On Tuesday May 18th, 2004, anth (1611) writes:

this is amazing, i had to keep re reading it , and the image and message became clearer,and each time i saw something new, this is pure imagination, i like especially the last two lines,

On Tuesday May 18th, 2004, anth (1611) writes:

im astounded by its creativity and intelligence and image, this is another mindblowing read

On Tuesday May 18th, 2004, PerfectAdvocate_Lives (23) writes:

On down I fall for this piece. Great job.

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