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The Chaos Theory

in the deep submission
where the touch of lips
can cause the eruption of destruction
irrationality flooding the doors of innocence
where the slightest blink of an eye
can cause mass hysteria
and the most soft spoken "i love you"
can destroy a human life-among others
it goes back to where we went
where we were
and where we are from
that can cause a sweet taste of denial
to have the power to start waves of malice
and to deliver every trusting human
with a stab to the back-typically speaking
watch the horror unfold-relentless

while some watch in fascination
others run in panic-no control
welcome to the chaos theory
it has its grip on your soul

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On Sunday March 25th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2407) writes:

this does ripple as maybe a butterfly's wing in one part of the world causes a tsunami in Indonesia or somewhere....a really usurping poem from start to finish; the swallowing catastrophe of our world...excellent, even now

On Sunday March 25th, 2007, Enigma (126) writes:

Thats an awsome write. I like that welcome to the chaos theory...COOL.

On Wednesday December 22nd, 2004, Lotophagi (449) writes:

wha, unreal piece, so much truth and emotion attached to that.... I love the concept, and I love your portrayal of it... Thank you.

On Tuesday December 21st, 2004, Clerik (49) writes:

Actually...the chaos theory is a book written in the early seventies but it is valid to your poem. Very self aware statement.

On Wednesday January 5th, 2005, Twilight (2101) writes:

umm..thanks? however i knew that...but yeah.

On Wednesday December 22nd, 2004, Jedi_MindFuck (318) writes:

i.e., a butterfly flapping its wings in Japan can cause a tornado in kansas...science and math have never been my "thing" but that was an interesting book

On Saturday October 30th, 2004, Anth (1611) writes:

i dont know how i missed this,its absolutely brilliant,the style and flkow is perfection-a masterclass

On Saturday October 30th, 2004, void (49) writes:

"others run in pani-no contol" that kinda reminds me of all the idiots surrounding me.

On Friday March 26th, 2004, TheArtOfX (105) writes:

Wow... thats a new one, but I'm lovin' it. Gotta love the Chaos Theory... Excellent piece and mastery of words and imagery Twilight. Mad props.

On Wednesday March 24th, 2004, Mute Serenade (216) writes:

captive- again, thanks much.... no words, just smiles, highest of compliments. - sue zen

On Monday March 22nd, 2004, Bloody_Hands (29) writes:

o0o0o0o0o I like... did I say like? I mean I love this! ~Lynne

On Sunday March 21st, 2004, Tracer (140) writes:

I had to read this a few times to "grip the chaos theory" so to speak, but you speak true words, great write...^vTracerv^

On Saturday March 20th, 2004, Daemonicus (639) writes:

GOD DAMN IT TWI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

On Tuesday March 16th, 2004, An Expired Member (13) writes:

love it. "welcome to the chaos theory it has its grip on your soul." andria

On Tuesday March 16th, 2004, BleedSilver (373) writes:

yes, chaos is emminent, especially with the way many treat their loved ones. Great one. Now you can't say I never comment, twi.

On Tuesday March 16th, 2004, Urban Shipwreck (985) writes:

Wonderful. Even the hint of these things can start a wave of panic in some people.

On Tuesday March 16th, 2004, Urban Shipwreck (985) writes:

This was really cleverly written, reminds me of something that would be spoken aloud at the beginning of an Outer Limits type show. Very well done:) ~Ship!

On Tuesday March 16th, 2004, OLd SouL (837) writes:

a mellow monotone voice dropping pitch at the end.. yeah I felt it. :::OLd

On Tuesday March 16th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (594) writes:

There are no words for this... =) Morb

On Tuesday March 16th, 2004, flying_fox (769) writes:

hell YES. Welcome indeed. blown away by this one... Fox

On Monday March 15th, 2004, capt_funguy (993) writes:

just never know what you're gonna pull out of your afro ... it's like you're more than one ... your thoughts transcend in this ... out far to potentially tragic consequences . ... at the core of this chaos ... there is a one ... a one with an afro of limi

On Monday March 15th, 2004, capt_funguy (993) writes:

of limitless resource ... you are that one ... behold .... twilight ..... loved it .. funguy

On Tuesday March 16th, 2004, Daemonicus (639) writes:

hell yea to that

On Monday March 15th, 2004, Mademoiselle_Minx (131) writes:

woah...the ending was just...wow....reminded me of something from Vanilla Sky for some reason, like a dream world or realism.Well done :)

On Monday March 15th, 2004, Lynaes (1125) writes:

Such a stunning and unique angle to tackle this from. I love the way you've converted emotions running between people into huge occurences/disasters; such is the the strength of the emotions. Amazing write, I really loved it. ~L

On Monday March 15th, 2004, TheProphetUntold (360) writes:

Very true, nice wording. Enjoyed the concept very much. +T.P.U+

On Monday March 15th, 2004, TheProphetUntold (360) writes:

The last stanza, shhshs a bite of harsh reality. Good show, good show. +T.P.U+

On Monday March 15th, 2004, Daemonicus (639) writes:

woah! *eyes and mouth wide open* where'd that come from? bloody brilliant! jeez! those subtle touches, causing eruption, made droplets in my mind wiggle out in circle formations... abstract imagery to blow the mind. If you ever doubt your poetic prowess..

On Monday March 15th, 2004, Daemonicus (639) writes:

....you're an idiot! serious, every moment in this is awe, this is fucked up! rock on, girl!

On Monday March 15th, 2004, Twilight (2101) writes:

:) i love you demon!!!!!!!!!

On Monday March 15th, 2004, PerfectAdvocate (25) writes:

I love this. The theory to me is a fact. This speakes true to everyone. Excellent

On Monday March 15th, 2004, Storm (184) writes:

A theory in my taste, reality is heard to face even in theory. And this is reality. Well done with putting this in action. Awesome..

On Monday March 15th, 2004, finaldestiny (98) writes:

wow i really like the last stanza the best, your were so upfront with your ideas in this poem and i really enjoyed it. nice job ~finaldestiny~

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