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Your Not Breathing...

now this is it...

inhale-trust-exhale

preparation for pain
brace yourself
your not breathing!

slap-wince-smile

shes only human you say
screaming at my mind to believe
shaking my conscious
making sure i view reality
from just the right angle
guiding yourself to the light of rejection
like an insect with addiction

butterflies-courage-hello

no i cant do it
for she is more then you know
she speaks in codes of beauty
her presence has a sweet charisma
staring into my passage of hope

minutes-hours-waiting

just to know shes there
to twist into knots of desire
and pray to whoever is capable of compassion
to just...let her

speak-smile-trust

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On Wednesday November 24th, 2004, Angelic Darkness (40) writes:

Like an artist to a blank page this just painted across my imagination. . ~*~Angi~*~

On Thursday September 16th, 2004, An Expired Member (9) writes:

OMG... chills went down my back......i love this you write really really well!

On Tuesday July 20th, 2004, weheldhandsattheendoftheworld (122) writes:

brought me right back into the emergency room... everything i wished that those around me could see i felt.. i was a bit winded from the pauses where i did stop breathing.. wonderful

On Tuesday May 18th, 2004, anth (1622) writes:

so many lines that i loved in this, i like this as one of the best of your works, butterflies-courage-hello was so cool and really captured that feeling and she speaks in codes of beauty ..as do you twi

On Sunday March 28th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (615) writes:

This is definatily something different, something good. Painted a wonderful picture. =) Morb

On Sunday February 22nd, 2004, Lynaes (1148) writes:

"she speaks in codes of beauty", I love that line. Fantastic piece of work. ~L

On Sunday February 22nd, 2004, stitchedheart (22) writes:

that was beautiful twi! i loved every second of it. lets hear it for my girl!!! :0) *shakes her ass n does a cheer for twi* ~angel

On Friday February 20th, 2004, Daemonicus (657) writes:

wow! now that is engaging! this just took me unwillingly from top to bottom and showed me the vivid inner progression of your feelings. i dont know how to say it, but theres something here that draws you along, as if the poem reads itself to you. awsome.

On Monday February 16th, 2004, capt_funguy (1006) writes:

purely pipriffic ... you're so easy to root for ... pray to whoever is capable of compassion ... open invite to any sympathetic deity ... nondenominational pleas .. love it ... funguy

On Tuesday February 17th, 2004, Twilight (2114) writes:

yay for pips!!

On Monday February 16th, 2004, suicideseason (2161) writes:

...truly the yearning of a tormented soul.i love the way you built this.the structure gave the words so much more weight.i loved "slap-wince-smile".awesome as always,My Twi:)tim

On Monday February 16th, 2004, blackdarkness (320) writes:

diffrent one from you....well done...

On Monday February 16th, 2004, wilted (270) writes:

i really liked this work... It put a smile on my face just reading it. The layout etc. is perfect... great work.

On Sunday February 15th, 2004, flying_fox (801) writes:

beautiful work Twi...i love "butterflies-courage-hello". you've expressed this whole piece perfectly. FF

On Sunday February 15th, 2004, nell (335) writes:

must agree with seraphic i could see these words in a song, excellent write

On Sunday February 15th, 2004, Seraphic (301) writes:

That flowed like song lyrics...very lovely *~seraph~*

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