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Shes Beautiful...As Usual

for you
a passion runs deep
burns hotter then the fire in your eyes
close enough to touch
but your not really there
purging and scorching me
drawing me inside you
inside your head, your mind-unwilted
words spilling from your pen
in puddles of philsophical beauty
speaking in soft whispers
just outside my earshot
feeling things not within eyesight
still and alone I yearn
for fate is never true
though fate is never wrong
I search the sands and seas
touching emptiness and fulfillment
unveiling lies and truth
feeling the heights of pain
and the screams of pleasure
all for you

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On Sunday March 25th, 2007, Enigma (126) writes:

Great words...I love it.

On Wednesday April 20th, 2005, Sin (1637) writes:

you are amazing dear ~kristy

On Tuesday April 12th, 2005, An Expired Member (12) writes:

mesmerizing, brilliant, beautiful

On Sunday January 30th, 2005, blue (1749) writes:

...you just leave me dizzy with emotion...you've found a place in my heart. ~b

On Sunday October 17th, 2004, Valentine (509) writes:

- after it has been read. Beautiful. ~*~Rose~*~

On Sunday October 17th, 2004, Valentine (509) writes:

Simply stunning - the flow is flawless. I am in awe at your writing ability "purging and scorching me drawing me inside you inside your head, your mind-unwilted words spilling from your pen" . . You have bidded for your poem to linger in my mind, long a

On Monday July 26th, 2004, Northstar (455) writes:

every piece I read by you totally pulls me in--I love your style, and this is yet another unbelievably beautiful poem

On Monday May 31st, 2004, aXe FactoR (428) writes:

stunning piece of work!

On Thursday April 15th, 2004, murder_in_clubland (497) writes:

yay~ss

On Monday April 26th, 2004, murder_in_clubland (497) writes:

gorgeous..lovely....thrillnig.. i lvoe it ~ss

On Sunday March 28th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (594) writes:

This one is definatily full of energy. I like it very much. -Morb

On Tuesday March 16th, 2004, OLd SouL (837) writes:

you portrayed well the agony.. the relief being just inches away from your fingertips. The feeling inside is torturous. :::OLd

On Monday March 1st, 2004, suicideseason (2144) writes:

_again,the passion and beauty that is the hallmark of your style come through,loud and clear...wonderful phrasing.wow...good stuff.:)tim

On Friday February 20th, 2004, Daemonicus (639) writes:

"for you/a passion runs deep" instantly engaged.... and this feeling of being drawn in, consumed by the other, whilst feeling out of reach. i love "puddles of philsophical beauty" incredible abstract imagery, vivid! and i love the end... the inner turmoil

On Friday February 20th, 2004, Daemonicus (639) writes:

all for the other. nice write, a lot here to look deeply into.

On Sunday February 15th, 2004, finaldestiny (98) writes:

this poem flows very nicely, and the emotion is evident, nice write ~finaldestiny~

On Sunday February 15th, 2004, Drifter (364) writes:

I believe this is the first work of yours i've read. Something i will have to quickly remedy. This was very impressive.

On Sunday February 15th, 2004, Midnight Phoenix (313) writes:

I hope this piece took you a long time to write, because there's so much depth and creative thought running through your lines... Simply incredible. "for fate is never true though fate is never wrong" is my favorite.

On Sunday February 15th, 2004, Midnight Phoenix (313) writes:

It's such an excellent embodiment of poetry. REAL poetry, as I would call it. It's great to see you haven't lost your touch Twi.

On Monday February 16th, 2004, Twilight (2102) writes:

what is weird is that this is the one poem it has oonly taken me a small amuon t of time to write...the inspiration was strong...:)

On Saturday February 14th, 2004, stitchedheart (22) writes:

i love this poem, its heartfelt and beautiful. the words BTW, u r beautiful too. ~angel

On Saturday February 14th, 2004, Twilight (2102) writes:

yay!! i love compliments. i just never believe them;)

On Thursday February 12th, 2004, Lemons (57) writes:

Yay!

On Thursday February 12th, 2004, Petrified Wood (70) writes:

I've been away for sometime as well...I am completely awestruck by your writing ability...this one blew me away...and I didn't know how beautiful you were either...**jwd**

On Thursday February 19th, 2004, Twilight (2102) writes:

thank you:)*blushes*

On Thursday February 12th, 2004, flying_fox (769) writes:

These words woo me Twi... beautiful. FF xx

On Thursday February 12th, 2004, Urban Shipwreck (989) writes:

"for fate is never true though fate is never wrong" And yet either way we never can seem to escape. This was a very interesting piece to read. Sad with a hint of madness. Well done. ~Ship!

On Wednesday February 11th, 2004, capt_funguy (999) writes:

make it happen ,,,, funguy

On Wednesday February 11th, 2004, XCryingMinotaurX (24) writes:

"a passion runs deep burns hotter then the fire in your eyes close enough to touch but your not really there" i hate that feeling...your so close and yet so far away...great write. anyone that listens to The Faint, is a friend of mine!

On Thursday February 12th, 2004, AlluringDescent_darkbride (765) writes:

She says it well. I completely agree. Oh...and I think this is the first pic you've ever put on your profile. you're beautiful, hun :)

On Wednesday February 11th, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis (607) writes:

Such longing...very emotional, great write

On Wednesday February 11th, 2004, knightmirror (425) writes:

superb show of talent.adding this to favorites.**** thumbs up

On Wednesday February 11th, 2004, Twilight (2102) writes:

On Wednesday February 11th, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1825) writes:

I agree totaly with stellar.. Emotions so grand.. and if I have to say something it would be that I hate the little i 's :O)

On Wednesday February 11th, 2004, Stellar (47) writes:

Your feelings are so concentrated with raw emotion, it always makes for awesome poetry. I feel this, a yearning for something you feel is out of your reach. Excellent write Twi. <3

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