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2-24-08

  you use to capture my beauty
in your eyes as every day meant that
something better for us would come together
but lately even though the weather said,
"Storms would be heading our way."
I still waited here in your arms
to capture the skies crying again.
  
  it was the little things that
tore us apart I remember
those nights so well as not even
the drinking could numb
this heart of pain that I held
so close in my hand's;
I almost begged the sun not to
show its golden smile to me.

  alone never felt so secure for me
as every night ended up this way
since we went our seperate ways
and I bled the candles to
its wicks end that laughed
way too loud for me to comprehend why
it was laughing at my broken heart again.

  even though I should have known that
this was how I was going to turn out;
with nothing but dried out tears falling from my eyes
from all of the years that loneliness
captured my heart before you did;
I almost wished that I could
show you a smile that
told you I was ok this time around.



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On Tuesday February 26th, 2008, Rebell tiGer King (639) writes:
damn brother, incredible that way you captured me in this, i have never felt the reality i fell when i read your posts, this was no different, words struck hard but brought relief, excellent write -symph-


On Tuesday February 26th, 2008, tangeled (526) writes:
agreed. you're incredible. :)


On Monday February 25th, 2008, Instant Insanity (754) writes:
" it was the little things that tore us apart I remember those nights so well as not even the drinking could numb " Oh how I can relate to this stanza. Your an amazing poet Mr Jon. Dont ever give it up. ][ ][


On Monday February 25th, 2008, whisperer (169) writes:
this touches me in ways i should hate you for. but it just emphasizes the power behind this work. faving


On Monday February 25th, 2008, tangeled (526) writes:
this is beautiful. the feelings were caught perfectly. a bit hard to read at points but very very good.


On Monday February 25th, 2008, Efamilia (53) writes:
You are a master at your craft! I always enjoy reading your posts. -Tim :)


On Sunday February 24th, 2008, Narcissa (721) writes:
Security in loneliness...it never lets you down. wounding but wonderful.



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