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inspired by Brad Paisley's "It Did"


11-6-07

  nothing lost into the hour glass today
that past the time away
to turn the grains of sand
that continued to drip one by one in two
until it was empty.

  moving from town to town;
it seemed like a bad dream
come true for me;
so I just held on to the memories
of all of my ex-lovers;
as I drank the pain of loneliness away
I wished I could stay close to you;
forever until the sunsets stopped
coming up from the horizon.

  so many favorite songs we shared
together as we made love
reminiscing the past;
God how I wish it could last
more than a second;
but I guess that's why they make
the liquor strong for me.

  so I have to grab hold of something
just so I can stand;
but my faithful one I use to love
never called me back
and I was left here again
in this room that the air
was getting thick and the
smell of alcohol on my breath
was getting worse.

  another day went by
as I got consumed in my work
to try to make a living;
even though it was a simple kind of living;
as my callouses showed you how hard I worked;
I was happy finally
that all I had to hold on to was
my work, my loneliness, and my alcohol
that never caused me to smile;
except for the alcohol.




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On Thursday November 8th, 2007, Efamilia (54) writes:
I'm not sure who coined the terms like 'tragically/depressingly' beautiful, nor if they have become to cliche for the compliment I wish it to bestow, but I feel it nevertheless... maybe even too much... LOL! Heavily felt as always.


On Thursday November 8th, 2007, Narcissa (749) writes:
I love the line about forever and the horizon. But forever is just a joke. you bring me to tears.


On Wednesday November 7th, 2007, Circe Avalon (187) writes:
Yeah if I could I would drink....but throwing up isn't as fun...to me. I can't hold it, but if I could I would be right there with you. Very good write. Tre` bein.


On Wednesday November 7th, 2007, Esau (282) writes:
i know i've said that certain pieces fit me and i can understand what's going on, but this time i was truly able to relate to the idea. i thought, wow, that's the world i'm in, but it seems i'm not alone. great write.



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