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7-18-07

  left with only
a picture perfect circle that
continues down my spine
as it enters into the fragments of
particles that came close to
a Death so perfect that was
discovered by you

  recycled by the dead Angels
covered in their own sacrificial blood;
my body laying next to theirs;
only to become passed upon the
green pastures that await our Souls

  drops dripping still;
deep into the wounds that
never healed me of
this life of sorrow and of madness;
i gave my dead Angel a kiss
on the cheek;
only to come to the realization that
the sunbeams will never
reign down on me ever again

  flowers, flowers, flowers; everywhere
embedded into our graves
trying to shut off the World;
i closed my coffin that was
my only purpose in this life

  as the particles shined through the
cracks once more i begged you; Jesus
to save my Salvation from
the Death that Lucifer
handed down to me tonight.



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On Thursday April 17th, 2008, An Expired Member (30) writes:
save my Salvation from the Death that Lucifer handed down to me tonight. ~this struck me down the most. very nice.


On Thursday October 18th, 2007, Distorted_Reality (151) writes:
good read ^_^


On Wednesday September 26th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2406) writes:
I followed this abysss in this one....I especally enjoyed the 'flowers'x3 chant....very psychotic and dark embedded, and with a good flow to match the mood....killer poetics


On Saturday August 18th, 2007, Kurashu (37) writes:
It's eerie. Like the sort of darkness that lies dormant in the back of one's head. Very good read.


On Wednesday September 26th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2406) writes:
yes.I'd say that's a very good way of describing it for sure :)


On Monday July 30th, 2007, saintedmad (1165) writes:
apocolyptic oblivion; a manifest of near macabre magnificence. ..but with such a divine undertone, a catechism of lost faith and love. .. darkly rich...ness


On Saturday July 21st, 2007, Tania (309) writes:
oh my god! jon .. didnt realise this was you.. you were missed & so was your work.. welcome back :)


On Friday July 20th, 2007, soul dancer (169) writes:
It is so good to see you are back! And even better than before judging from this piece!!


On Thursday July 19th, 2007, Mylissa (1085) writes:
this is absolutely wonderful...welcome back!! Happy to see you.


On Thursday July 19th, 2007, Aunty Depressant (711) writes:
I feel much more contemplation and true sorrow in this write , not just anguish or mayhem. Sometimes a Sabbatical is what one needs so that they can return anew. *Hugs


On Thursday July 19th, 2007, urbanhumility (1351) writes:
your words are sharp......with vivid direction and feeling..........



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