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"Lost In Tangerine" by NeroMatches

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The lights from the orange brick city malls crawling
Catwalk, thin lines breaking the ice of first conversations and dead air
Floating like fine mist and smoke over mudshakes and vodka breathing—
Sighing empty heat into the night devoid of silent gasps engraved in Cuervo salt
That the other girls used to wear in parties and in bars
Always lost, always found and gone forever into the whitened canvasses
Drowned in acid erasers and melting tears
Fading into melancholic Coltrane




…But…






I still dance to your words that drip like songs
And forgotten rings from your lips, moving softly
As clouds part in the sea of cobalt cracked by broken stars falling,
Diving into that famed oblivion in the sky—
Waiting always for the sun to melt away


…flooding…
…gushing…





Into the rain—





Praying for dawn’s proverbial stay.




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On Thursday May 11th, 2006, Medusas Child (1613) writes:
i love this write, theres so much to it. i smiled as i read it the first time, the idea and way its presented is just brilliant,


On Thursday May 11th, 2006, Medusas Child (1613) writes:
your work is illusive and rare and conjures up so many things so hard to express, things like you notice when your half daydreaming and half concentrating on everyday events


On Saturday May 6th, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1149) writes:
"As clouds part in the sea of cobalt cracked by broken stars falling, Diving into that famed oblivion in the sky—Waiting always for the sun to melt away" sigh. this is too beautiful..and the ending..damn. your so talented, jules. don't ever stop writing.


On Saturday May 6th, 2006, Michelle Xiao (499) writes:
Divine work, the tangerine, it's a mystery of beauty, and the feeling captured here is like being in a city which has found you.


On Saturday May 6th, 2006, Railway_Butterfly (464) writes:
This needs more comments. Lots more. I'm on it.


On Saturday May 6th, 2006, Zen (625) writes:
damn that was good. im gonna remember it for a long time.


On Saturday May 6th, 2006, AniDayz (1268) writes:
intensely creative, wondrous through and through.



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