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The Forbidden

Bite my tongue my teeth are hard
Like a crossbow broken bard
Things are seldom as they seem
Choking on a shattered dream

Frozen circle sterling stream
Hold my breath suppress a scream
Poisoned from the dimly hidden
Kiss the lips of the forbidden

Deceptive like the cool night starred
Like an ardent defaced card

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On Tuesday November 14th, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2401) writes:

perhaps line 4 of the second stanza compresses the flow...for-bid-den being a bit chunky (trochee?) for the rythmic flow?? Alas...it's refreshing to see a metrical piece with poetic feel..juicy write

On Sunday April 23rd, 2006, K_Love (684) writes:

Beautifully written, the imagery is magical and the flow was perfect. Loveliness in it's greatest form.

On Sunday April 23rd, 2006, MelvinOliverDrauma (546) writes:

good rhythem

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