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Perfidy

In freeing me from love’s sweet grip
She pulled the veil from o’er mine eyes.
But seeing, feeling life without her
Leaves memories: betrayer’s lies.

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On Monday May 1st, 2006, mywristshurt (511) writes:

this was really short.. plz write more to this one, i'd love to hear a longer, better story

On Monday February 13th, 2006, saintedmad (1155) writes:

poignant precision... liquid flow and imagery; please stay awhile :} ~ness

On Saturday February 11th, 2006, blue (1700) writes:

=) Minimalistic excellence here, most certainly! Welcome to DP. ~b

On Friday February 10th, 2006, purr_verse (1423) writes:

Magnificently succinct, beautifully crafted piece. Manywelcomes to dp - this is quality. :)

On Friday February 10th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1021) writes:

This is perfection. *applauds this and you* What a way to enter DP Land... Just astounding! Julia~

On Friday February 10th, 2006, dp_whipping_girl (396) writes:

too true :( sadly.. agree with elisa...damn well said. i need to hang a copy of that up to read more often. ty for sharing

On Friday February 10th, 2006, elisa (1987) writes:

life without love would be treason....well said.

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