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Love?

Lovely lies
eyes locked on my thighs
as I turn to walk away..
the tables turn
you should have learned
That I couldn't possibly stay..
the moment you spoke
something inside awoke
my life has forever changed
so thank you love
truly a gift from above
that you were born so absolutely deranged
on with my life
I'll never think twice
again of such an unlikely thing.

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On Thursday March 27th, 2008, Ainsof (1866) writes:

it's easy, is it not, to fall in love with love... at what point do expectations undermine the possibility... a most unlikely occurrence... but then better to have loved and... well, you know the story

On Thursday March 27th, 2008, Ainsof (1866) writes:

words that arouse the soul... where love lies... unlikely love is

On Saturday June 17th, 2006, An Expired Member (19) writes:

It makes me ashamed that there are so many men out there like that, giving men like me a bad name. Excellent piece!

On Sunday February 12th, 2006, Michelle Xiao (481) writes:

You have just written my heart. Detachment sucks. You are grand.

On Saturday February 11th, 2006, Crimson Shade (114) writes:

"Lovely lies eyes locked on my thighs" - i loved the opening lines - made me think of how obsessed men can actually be - good write.

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