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Tick Tock

something snaps inside
endorphins twist and shift

collide in a suicidal rampage

all in stride
my eyes open to see the same reality
melt the frailty

dark matter is taunting
every dream
intangible and haunting
gFucking oHelp dMe

days come and die

in this timeless mastery
of hopeless amnesty

the whistle blows
day is done

all at rest
every one

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On Friday July 4th, 2008, Chunky (49) writes:

meh. if things dont turn up, remember. death will end all this. soon enough.

On Friday March 21st, 2008, chrome arctic (24) writes:

"days come and die "....great line refreshing read. great style and context. thanks for posting

On Thursday March 13th, 2008, Sketso (624) writes:

Hidden message, artistry out of the mundane, the inevitability... nicely done!

On Wednesday March 12th, 2008, Ainsof (1866) writes:

banality... boredom... the hands point ceaselessly from one to the other... the face nameless... vacant... eyes that can never warm... no smile graces, no grace is shown. this bespeaks the anonymous sound of expiration... the consumption of what is, ever, ours to give. nice write!

On Sunday February 17th, 2008, Nixx (166) writes:

fucking help me god. i like the hidden message

On Sunday February 17th, 2008, freudian-slip (396) writes:

days come and die. I like that. g

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