I miss you

Taken back to a memory
When it didn't hurt like this.
I was yours, and yours alone
And you were mine to miss.
Each day that passes
That goes all too slow
I regret what I've done
And I'm sorry I let go.
I thought there'd be another day
Another chance to make it right
But now I fear that I've let go
Of the only hope of might.
I wonder what you're doing
I wonder how you've been
I think about the good times
We'll never have again.
I'm sorry I made it hell for you
I thought I could be strong
I truly hope you're happy now.
I'm sorry, I was wrong

• On Tuesday, June 5, 2007, Thorn (356) wrote:
  
  I have little to say that has not already been said about this. It's an amazing poem.
  
  
• A former member wrote: We all wear our trespasses so heavily, and comfort within our skin is a foreign concept. Your poem left a feeling that lingers. Thank you.
  
  
• On Thursday, February 23, 2006, Marek (100) wrote:
  
  I dig it. Made me think of my gf at the beginning. Your rhyme at the end makes it final, which is nice. The sentiment at the end follows the theme of the poem well. nice write
  
  
• On Tuesday, February 7, 2006, darkdesires (188) wrote:
  
  heart rippingly sad. I love this and I know exactly what this feels like I still feel it all the time. Welcome to DP...
  
  
• On Tuesday, January 31, 2006, Alanarchy (1483) wrote:
  
  You don't need the conformation of others for your strength to be apparent. This poem, was again, dreamlike in it's sadness. I've become of fan of YOURS. keep at it.
  
  
• On Tuesday, January 31, 2006, Jaded Ireland (28) wrote:
  
  thanks guys. glad you liked it.
  
  
• On Tuesday, January 31, 2006, Crimson Shade (99) wrote:
  
  Fantastic flow to the poem and very heart wrenching... good write, you keep writing and i'll keep reading.
  
  
• On Tuesday, January 31, 2006, vaultgrl (211) wrote:
  
  ......wow.....this is so powerful...and beautiful....and i love it all....great write....welcome to dp!!......
  
  
• A former member wrote: Oh my god..."I was yours, and yours alone/And you were mine to miss." You, my dear, are one I am going to read more from. This fragmented my heart in beautiful bits. Perfect rhyme scheme...this is lovely. *Evangel*