Dark Poetry - Proudly Publishing Poems Prose And People's Priceless Poetry
"Unforgiven" by The Unforgiven Child

Dark Poetry Home

Log In

Random Poetry


(I think I should specify, before I write this work, that my family died in a fire when I was seven. This is why you'll see a lot of reference to flames in my work. I was the only one of my mother, father, and little brother, to survive.. therefore, I am the Unforgiven Child.)

Crying out, blanketed in smoke,
The child cannot run,
You've struck again, taken another,
mother, father, son.

Death it seems is everywhere,
or at least it's in my fate,
it shadows me with wicked grace,
it beckons me with hate.

Slowly, I am giving in,
I am crawling in my hole,
you've left me cold and empty,
you've destroyed my very soul.

So now I stand here screaming,
my mind is lost to rage,
my only wish, for you to come,
so that I can turn that page.

I am.. Unforgiven.

(At the end of this, I'd like to thank DarkNTormented for introducing me to the site, where I'm confident enough to post my works, and know they'll be accepted by my peers. Thanks, dollface. Looking forward to talking to you more often.)





Copying this work to another webpage without author permission is plagiarism.
Plagiarism is a misdemeanor, usually punishable by fines of $100-$50000 and up to one year in jail.




If you [Log In] as a member you can discuss this work with others

On Sunday January 14th, 2007, beautifulfallenangel (105) writes:
sometimes, the past is too hard to let go, and i'm sorry for the pain that you've been though, but you write beautifully, a token of fresh air to remind the whithering soul, there is life.......


On Monday May 29th, 2006, weyvern (103) writes:
thats so amazing! im sorry for the pain that caused it but the beautie you have crafted from it...I look forward to future writes im glad you survived, your a sensation


On Sunday May 7th, 2006, mywristshurt (511) writes:
wow.. just wow.. tragic, and i'm very sorry.. and yet i am one of those many that can barely see past the pain


On Friday April 28th, 2006, Astra Dei (632) writes:
You have a lot of anger and pain and guilt. It bleeds from your work as does your passion to be dispassionate. You survived, do not waste a "miracle"


On Wednesday March 29th, 2006, damascus (134) writes:
wow...... heart touching.... I am sorry for you pain


On Wednesday February 1st, 2006, DarkNTormented (17) writes:
awww....im speechless so i guess i cant say too much..lol..you are such a sweet guy...and your work is awesome!!! ~Amy~


On Friday January 27th, 2006, Shewolf (39) writes:
Beautifuly written though I'm sorry for the source of your pain....~Shewolf~


On Friday January 27th, 2006, NikesRain (1422) writes:
welcome to dp. heartbreaking to know the source.. yet in this you've conveyed the anger frustration and loss perfectly... well done


On Thursday January 26th, 2006, Forgotten Angel (474) writes:
im so sorry....and this...is just..unspeakably awesome...i've no words to put what i feel in..if that made sense... -Kel



Navigation for Text Browsers
Things to Read  Home  Copyright Policy  Bugs


Owned and operated by GeniusWeb.com LLC


© 1996-2008 Matthew Steven
You must agree to our terms of service in order to to access this site

Need help? Reach us on the poetry site resource page.



Printed from www.DarkPoetry.com/dp/12311/76683 on Tuesday December 02nd, 2008 03:46 PM

Certain elements © 1996-2008 Matthew Steven (matts.org)