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I trip occasionally
On the shoe laces of giants

but I can lift myself up
With the gusts of their footsteps


you, however


You are enormous

Gods cradle their gentle wraths
And hide beneath
the catacombs of Atlantis

As you burn
like a bursting nebula
above them

Aware only
of the spectacular
grains of sand
that illuminate
like chinese lanterns
upon glass
mirages

You ensured my
position in a realm of
Bohemoths

With your quiet
Concerns
I was kept from stumbling
off the cliffs
of your
lips

I have been there
ever since
staring into the face
of a full-eyed moon

...whytt*07



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On Wednesday March 19th, 2008, TropicalSnowstorm (696) writes:
"aware only of the spectacular grains of sand that illuminate" - beautiful tribute! Just had to stop by and read some of your work again...always love feeling the "Hate". : ) Ciao, T/S


On Friday January 4th, 2008, xserratedsoulx (284) writes:
i'm addicted to this poem.


On Monday September 24th, 2007, Nail Bunny (229) writes:
Wow, this is amazing... How have I never found your stuff before?


On Tuesday August 7th, 2007, Dommi (131) writes:
This was beautiful, I have a lot of catching up to do reading-wise :)


On Wednesday June 13th, 2007, LadyMalice (28) writes:
I love the imagery. ^_^


On Tuesday May 8th, 2007, wilted (273) writes:
Y'know... I am constantly amazed by all that comes from you... in the writing sense, of course, you could to better with the hair :] seriously, though, you really are an amazing writer. and you keep getting better and better.


On Sunday April 29th, 2007, A Velvet Tongue (532) writes:
With your quiet Concerns I was kept from stumbling off the cliffs of your lips ...gods whytt..could it be put more beauteous than this?..i miss you..doll...


On Saturday April 21st, 2007, Recycled (161) writes:
You still make the rest of us look bad. grrr.


On Friday March 23rd, 2007, Midnight Phoenix (316) writes:
Wow. I really loved the story that played out in my mind during this. Everything is so vivid and wonderfully said. It seems so innocent and youthful, yet deep and passionate.


On Friday March 2nd, 2007, Mab (1096) writes:
magnifique! I must read more of your work


On Friday February 2nd, 2007, TropicalSnowstorm (696) writes:
Simply beautiful! There were so many fantastic lines in this piece, it had me from start to finish. Ciao, T/S


On Wednesday January 10th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1171) writes:
cant beleive ive been here this long, and this would be the first time ive read you... i have to read more for sure


On Monday January 8th, 2007, dying angel (1374) writes:
omg. this.is.unimaginably perfect.


On Sunday January 7th, 2007, Inevitability (646) writes:
damn. I hate one word comments, but, really. damn.


On Sunday January 7th, 2007, carlosjackal (1608) writes:
I really should start reading more of your stuff..*faves*


On Sunday January 7th, 2007, Anna Helianthus (1165) writes:
wow. this is a thouroughly incredible piece.


On Saturday January 6th, 2007, Six-Out (1831) writes:
god. it's been amazing to watch you grow as a writer. you astound.



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