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"My try at a sonnet" by hate_doll

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You think there's every night to live this way

And remain subtle in the way you stride

Please, give me just a moment to convey

Passion's plea and the bliss it will provide

A chance is in your smile, this dance is a risk

The floor is alive with what could be had

You don't give me any reason to persist

Though you do have a come-hither laugh

Let go of other nights, hold only this one

It is time to strut rather than refuse

Fell the beat and leave your shoes undone

To take this dance or not is yours to choose,

"My stride is subtle and shall stay so

And as to your question, the answer is no."




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On Thursday July 13th, 2006, GreekPhilosopher (180) writes:
Hey Hey Hey Now. That Was Really Good! Loved It! GPhD.


On Friday June 2nd, 2006, Zen (602) writes:
your profile reminds me of an anime


On Friday June 2nd, 2006, blue (1700) writes:
Damn you and all others that can actually write solid sonnets! I..just..can't..do..it. grr. *snarlyface* "fell the beat..." loved that line! ~b


On Friday June 2nd, 2006, GreekPhilosopher (180) writes:
"My stride is subtle" Very Nice. Glad To See You Still Writing! GPhD.


On Wednesday May 3rd, 2006, monalisamarie (146) writes:
I love the structure of Shakespearian sonnets and you have pulled this one off with elequence and a level of thought that even Willy himself would enjoy.


On Tuesday April 18th, 2006, Blood of Winter (367) writes:
Your words seem to flow from a better world, one more beautiful and invigoratingly filled with life.


On Tuesday April 18th, 2006, wilted (306) writes:
Your try at sonnetting is well taken... I like the flow of this, it's as if i can hear you speaking it and giggling at every line that holds special meaning to you. I don't know what i just said, i just wanted to sound cool. loves.



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