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I'm falling over the stars
You put in place
To write my name
In the glittering sky

It's so perfect
How from far off,
The stars just seem to glow
And invite celestial warmth
But up close
You see they are jagged
And only cut to cut deep
So destroy me, baby
I'm all yours

Slice me with the promises
We made to each other

Now I'm left
Sifting through the sands
Of forget-me-nots
That lied
Failing to hold
Their little piece of tragedy
Your little tragedy
Our tragedy

I invited passion
For tea today
We discussed clandestine
Desires
She didn't even touch her food

So I fell asleep
On your shoulder
After taking my sleeping pill
Your kiss


I think I overdosed

Wake me
When the mo[u]rning comes



...whytt



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On Monday October 30th, 2006, An Expired Member (129) writes:
that was amzing


On Tuesday April 18th, 2006, mywristshurt (524) writes:
it was okay for me.. i mean a like it, its your thing and you have your own style, but it wasnt the greatest you could do


On Sunday November 14th, 2004, Loserland (134) writes:
very powerful...love the last line


On Sunday October 10th, 2004, indefined (713) writes:
a very honest peice, has an aura of it's own, i think i've been missing out by not reading your works yet, i shall rectify my mistake at once. bravo


On Tuesday October 5th, 2004, Amandasauris rex (72) writes:
and you have struck me with radience from this piece. holy shit. *queenie*


On Wednesday September 29th, 2004, An Expired Member (8) writes:
i love you work it is so passionately and full of emotion it makes you feel like you are watching the whole thing. ~kristen~


On Wednesday September 29th, 2004, WinterGrave (337) writes:
wow, amazing write, such emotion in depth should always be praised.~~~Grave


On Tuesday September 28th, 2004, Sharon Rose (658) writes:
ah, you don't need my comments..everybody else said it..and isn't it funny how our most painful moments bring our most beautiful creations..kind of like childbirth..hopefully you'll forget the pain and praise the child...


On Tuesday September 28th, 2004, Savannah (290) writes:
wonderful as always


On Tuesday September 28th, 2004, wilted (301) writes:
Your writing is always so wonderful and I am always so amazed. Even though i'm here for you and know what you experience, your writing just makes it all seem much more elegant and sad and dreadful. [I miss you whytt! you have to get out more...]


On Tuesday September 28th, 2004, ElegantKiss (399) writes:
This is so well written and perfect.. It made me feel hazy and satisfied. Mm. Lovelylovelylovely!


On Tuesday September 28th, 2004, Twilight (2101) writes:
oh wow."So destroy me, baby I'm all yours" such masochistic longing. to be with, the pain that rips us apart for the one true notion, that they can put you back together again. tea for two with passion is deadly, she slips things in your tea.


On Monday September 27th, 2004, urbanhumility (1363) writes:
your words like to hang around my head once and a while.........thank you sweet poet.................urban


On Monday September 27th, 2004, Lucia (6) writes:
....speechless... wonderful as always... write more often!!


On Monday September 27th, 2004, evolve (2247) writes:
Pinprick to the Heart.core. (before & after) Fuck. I'm dwelling off your bitter edge.


On Monday September 27th, 2004, Lynaes (1125) writes:
This is absolutely perfect... you've worded everything beautifully, and I could deeply relate.. Heart-hitting work here.. And the "I invited passion" stanza is killer... awesome work, I love it.


On Monday September 27th, 2004, Blood of Winter (367) writes:
Whytt when it comes to the artistry that is words formed to poetry you are noticably above the rest with your defined style that is all your own...please do not stop writing so wonderfully...


On Monday September 27th, 2004, Six-Out (1822) writes:
Whitney dear...this was too much. Your words are heavy...they hurt. Wonderful write...very powerful.


On Monday September 27th, 2004, Zhee (640) writes:
this was amazing.. very well written...


On Monday September 27th, 2004, Butterfly (122) writes:
Wow this is just awesome. I love this. Excellant piece.


On Monday September 27th, 2004, FallenFaith (47) writes:
I absolutely hate 3 word comments but all i can say is beautiful.


On Monday September 27th, 2004, GreekPhilosopher (181) writes:
Hehehe... I Guess I Overdosed. GPhD.


On Monday September 27th, 2004, Anth (1611) writes:
brilliance,absolute brilliance, the second verse is great,cool style to this.it just..reads..so well,loved it,especially the fifth verse


On Monday September 27th, 2004, GreekPhilosopher (181) writes:
Wow... Simply Stirring. And Probably The Best Image I Have Ever Read Was About Your "Sleeping Pill" I Loved It. Gosh, Im So Gushy Lately. Hehehe. Thanks. GPhD.



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