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"Snake Eyes" by hate_doll

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Scribbles like
Hyrogliphics
Mixed up, jumbled
Panty-stained sayings
Only we can giggle
And choke on
We burn like candles
Crackling into flickering
Waves, hoping some will wave back
I'd notice,
If rolled on clavicles
Shuddering in justified
Libido stand-offs
I could roll snake eyes
And keep you longer
Than just tonight

...whytt*04


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On Tuesday April 3rd, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2401) writes:
yes libdo/snake does suggest maybe seductive symbolism, or maybe I'm just conditionally male....but nonetheless this rippled offbeat and unusual with such unique and interestng concepts behind it...like it Whytt


On Sunday November 14th, 2004, Loserland (134) writes:
well written...i find it unrelatable..yet i still like it


On Tuesday September 28th, 2004, Twilight (2084) writes:
there is this deep erotic mood to your work. this craving that shines through even the lightest of moments. you seem to heavy them with you alluring thoughts. beautifully done. i loved the ending.


On Wednesday September 15th, 2004, Blood of Winter (367) writes:
There seems to be a lot of personal symbolism in your writings as of late...it's good stuff


On Saturday August 28th, 2004, wilted (306) writes:
Yaaay... this is happier. Keep up the cheeriness... It's a nice change. Nice poem by the way... short and sweet with a lovely end. Nice work, chocolate covered cherry. [yup, i'm a dork]


On Monday August 23rd, 2004, Northstar (453) writes:
I love the sounds of the words you use---so nicely done, and the ending is killer



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