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Tracing over
Nothing images
Saddened by how
Unalike they look
I try to be cliche
Say "wait for tomorrow,
It'll be better"
But cliche never
Worked for us
Neither did tomorrow

...whytt*04


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On Friday February 16th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1140) writes:
....powerfull...i remember feeling this way... very, very good


On Sunday November 14th, 2004, Loserland (134) writes:
well put....last three lines really hook you


On Tuesday September 28th, 2004, Twilight (2101) writes:
nice...very sad. hopeless and understandab;e. yet the depth of this is intriguing. makes the reader want to go deeper into your mind and pick apart how it works, and what makes you feel what you feel. i know i do ;)


On Wednesday September 15th, 2004, Blood of Winter (367) writes:
This does bring things to the surface...memories of times past but not forgotten...the cliches seem to never work; do they.


On Saturday August 28th, 2004, wilted (303) writes:
...But maybe your tomorrow with someone else will work... and maybe some other cliche will work for your tomorrow. Keep your chin up, raspberry turnover.


On Monday August 23rd, 2004, Choronzon (233) writes:
Quite profound. I've felt this way a lot of times. Who says that cliches are right?


On Monday August 23rd, 2004, suicideseason (2141) writes:
_very powerful...especially the last few lines...cold and hard...but the truth.well done.



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