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Sin and Tonic

Black nails trace
Sinful indulgences
On to milky flesh
Waning numbness

Silky voice
Muttering memories
Into the depth of being
Isolating inhibitions

"take me"

Weaving desire
Into curls
Of cigarette smoke
Lingering on stale lips

Rendering temptation
From carnal wishes
Let this be the time
Resistance is wrong

"let me"

Velvet eyes
Seclude me
In the mists
Of feral breaths

Seeping underneath
Pleasant agression
Feeding the fire
To wanton movements

"Make me"

Dangerous trysts
Shrouded in mystery
Hung by lost purity
Entertained by passion

Angelic succubus
Sipping ripened lust
Heating livened desires
And seducing words

"Drink me"

...whytt*04

{I'uno...}

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On Monday September 24th, 2007, ShatteredFaith (235) writes:

this was awsome. i loved it

On Thursday January 25th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1149) writes:

ok, yeah, you go on favs for sure...

On Wednesday July 12th, 2006, blackdarkness (311) writes:

I stoped by to check on you love, and i am glad i did.....;)

On Monday June 28th, 2004, Lord Kalgalath (229) writes:

as sensual and lulling as any opiate...great...(i know i commented before i felt the need to do so again)

On Wednesday June 9th, 2004, Blood of Winter (367) writes:

Now Whytt, I would have to say this is the sexxxiest thing I have ever read...it's as if these words are a sensual hand running delicately erotic fingers the length of my mind

On Monday April 12th, 2004, Twilight (2102) writes:

o wow. i dont usually leave comments like this but o how i wish to write something of his calibur. you have amazed me.

On Sunday April 4th, 2004, An Expired Member (4) writes:

not just any cigarette will do here, it must be a bong so i can get back to reading more. damn this is outstanding dear. well done, very well done

On Thursday March 25th, 2004, flying_fox (769) writes:

this was sensual, sultry...seductive. All those great 's' words! *wooh* Think I need a cigarette now... Fox

On Monday March 22nd, 2004, wilted (295) writes:

Interesting... I don't know either, whytt. It was enjoyable though and brought about an interesting picture in my mind. Listen to me man, just listen to me.. Dude, really, dude, listen to me. It's just like cheap trailor trash porn.

On Monday March 22nd, 2004, wilted (295) writes:

[i love poking fun at you : ]...]

On Monday March 22nd, 2004, hate_doll (328) writes:

hehe...you better shush up right quick lil' dear or daddy's gunna rip you a new asshole :-p

On Saturday March 20th, 2004, Ravenblade (275) writes:

Very seductive write, with great imagery...poems like these and the ones that remind me of my past are why I fell in love with your poetry...way to continue impressing me...

On Thursday March 18th, 2004, Lynaes (1129) writes:

Wow, very seductive, real and raw. I loved the flow and the wording, paints an extremely vivid picture. Awesome write. ~L

On Thursday March 18th, 2004, OLd SouL (838) writes:

I need to find a bunny. :::OLd

On Thursday March 18th, 2004, Mademoiselle_Minx (131) writes:

Ooh your back on your yummy seductive writing...Ah I love spring, I agree with nell. Hate, this is awesome, Id love someone I know to read this...rekindle memories...mmm x

On Thursday March 18th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (594) writes:

jesus fuckin h christ! This is so awesome....I could only dream of this....=) Morb

On Thursday March 18th, 2004, capt_funguy (999) writes:

cool title , , and " in the mists of feral breaths" was fuckin' great .... has a spoken feel to it somehow .. like a breathy whisper ... loved it ... funguy

On Wednesday March 17th, 2004, nell (328) writes:

ahh spring is definatly in the air with all these sensual poems being written, t'is the time to fuck like bunnies, this was so dark, deep and sexy, wicked write

On Wednesday March 17th, 2004, Lord Kalgalath (229) writes:

ooo...i like it i like it..very sultry dim and is that a hint of decadence..?

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