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"save our country"
"save our county"
"buy the bombs"
"buy the bombs"
Let our teachers slowly quit
Let the books slowly tear
Let the chalk slowly fade away
To nothing
And nothing will be done

...because...

The government has effectively
Sold fear to the american people

***and***

we buy it like sickly sweet cotton candy
Fluffy and tasty, but be careful...
...you might throw up


Wave not the flag of freedom
But the flag of blinded faith
The flag of restricted rights


Let us not send medicine and food,
But soldiers and guns...


->Sorry, we don't do salvation
Maybe you could step out of the office
Of arrogance, and make a left
To hope

But don't expect us to help you out


and remember, we'll never let you down
unless, of course...the money's right


...whytt *03



(thanks to Nightingale and S.R. Parke for last night's little discussion, they inspired some of the thoughts and words in this piece)



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On Monday September 18th, 2006, Bluegirl (243) writes:
sad, but true. Beautifully written. "be careful... you might throw up" yes, INDEED!


On Wednesday December 1st, 2004, SamoneDrone (400) writes:
amazing! you wrote this so well. i love it!


On Friday October 15th, 2004, Nesfurata (67) writes:
Very good write. I love the honesty and sarcasm -Elizabeth


On Saturday August 7th, 2004, mysticventures (537) writes:
GREAT WRITE! - well put - Land of the free my ass - with over 2 million laws on the books?


On Saturday August 7th, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:
Tattered. Torn. Freedom forlorn. My sanity scorned.


On Monday March 29th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (593) writes:
For some reason this makes me wanna spit, spit all over the damn flag. Lol. This is complete true and raw in nature. I loved it. -Morb


On Monday March 29th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (593) writes:
ugh... completely rather


On Saturday September 20th, 2003, Chameleon (120) writes:
*burning the flag*...Ah, the tyranny of people led astray...REVOLUTION!


On Saturday September 20th, 2003, Demosthenes (222) writes:
hate, my dear. wonderful. enough said. -B


On Saturday September 13th, 2003, manywalks (947) writes:
...sorry, we don't do salvation... that line says it all. ~ mw


On Monday August 25th, 2003, Deliverence (797) writes:
Ah yes..politics...how boring is that..-Kefka


On Monday August 4th, 2003, Sharon Rose (666) writes:
Oh, Whytt, that was a perfect synopsis of what we were talking about that night...you did so good with this, and it's blunt truth and you don't shy away from it...


On Monday August 4th, 2003, An Expired Member (42) writes:
Its a great write. Your opinions expressed bluntly and openly and i love it for that. I disagree politically of course but you raise questions and i respect that more than you can know. ^aura^


On Saturday August 2nd, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (527) writes:
And as always, my dark dolly...You wrote it cut throat and brash...Just the way I like it! Love it babe! ~Vel~


On Friday August 1st, 2003, blackdarkness (309) writes:
I agree....great write...well put...


On Friday August 1st, 2003, Griffin (134) writes:
damn i missed the discussion, well nice write. you would be surprized with the similarites between the bush and nixon administration


On Friday August 1st, 2003, Ophelia (305) writes:
Very nice, didn't some one say last night that the flag was made in China. Love this,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,O.


On Friday August 1st, 2003, DarkPoet (225) writes:
Hey. I like how you think. Time for a regieme change here at home.


On Friday August 1st, 2003, diavolessa (275) writes:
YUP, I second that. We need some cleaning done here in DC!



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