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Pierce my pale milky skin.
Set my raging rivers free.
I won't mind.

Scratch away my face;
Pluck out my eyes.
I won't mind.

Enter me with unleashed rage.
Rip my insides to shreds.
I won't mind.

Leave scars on me with your steeple spikes...
make me bleed til all eternity.
I won't mind.

I yearn for this sweet haven of your abuse.
I take pride in showing my black and blue skin created by your deceit.
You won't mind if I took my turn, would you?


© 2006 Lucklost

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On Sunday April 1st, 2007, stormtalk (908) writes:
You would totally mind if I plucked out your eye.


On Saturday January 27th, 2007, Zen (623) writes:
well it definately is twisted. but its cool that way you know? i like it . maybe im sick too :)


On Tuesday January 9th, 2007, heartdripsblack (768) writes:
i loved this write. i related so much to it. and its nice to have a fellow real dark poet along side me. ~ red.


On Wednesday April 26th, 2006, mywristshurt (524) writes:
man what a turn around in the end..


On Wednesday March 29th, 2006, Angst Queen (470) writes:
Oh yes take your turn and let us see how he minds. Great write.


On Monday February 6th, 2006, damascus (136) writes:
Awsome.... rip my insides to shreds/I won't mind.... great write


On Wednesday February 1st, 2006, Err0r (571) writes:
Aha. The end is great. I wonder if it's inappropriate to laugh at such a thing. I guess I'm twisted and sadistic. Oh well. Wonderful write.


On Wednesday January 25th, 2006, Sanctuary (84) writes:
I can feel the emotion burning within you as you write this!! Excellent


On Monday January 23rd, 2006, Johny_D_Lewis (607) writes:
take your tun, on him and show no mercym well written



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