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"Emergency Entrance to Life by Night (Narrow Escapes)" by Estrella Destrozada

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trickling goes the water
down her trembling leg


as excruciating pains
pulse through her body in waves


screams of agony then fill
the air around, no longer still


she then implores her husband to
rush her to the emergency room


"My baby!" she screams, "There's something wrong!
Please make sure not to take too long!"


they wheel her through and down the halls
while moans of pain echo off walls


she then is prepped for rescue of
the product of their christened love


as he watches on with grief
he sees her shaking like a leaf


"Don't worry love, she's almost here.
Soon you'll hold her, please don't fear."


and then the doctor screams aloud
"It's a girl! You should be proud!"


and then mother looked in daughter's eyes
and saw that she'd fly well beyond the skies





Written Aug. 6, 7, 14, 2006.



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On Thursday October 5th, 2006, Velvet_Raventon (692) writes:
I am glad you won, I voted for you =) ~V.


On Thursday October 5th, 2006, Estrella Destrozada (230) writes:
thank you so much!


On Thursday October 5th, 2006, Instant Insanity (735) writes:
awww.


On Tuesday October 3rd, 2006, Bakkhus Unbound (1106) writes:
"while moans of pain echo off walls" The beauty of life; well done.


On Saturday August 19th, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1123) writes:
i really liked this..very moving account of birth, illustrated by the almost death..the two contrasts made this very appealing and intersting to read. great write!


On Tuesday August 15th, 2006, dying angel (1310) writes:
very moving peice here. and very suspenseful


On Tuesday August 15th, 2006, Rebel_not_Radical (158) writes:
~Wow this so touching. Its like a heartwarming story with "Based on a life story" label. Very cool


On Tuesday October 3rd, 2006, Rebel_not_Radical (158) writes:
~congratulations by the way...


On Tuesday August 15th, 2006, Estrella Destrozada (230) writes:
this is a true recount of my entrance into the world....my mother and I both would have died if they didn't do the c-section when they did.


On Tuesday August 15th, 2006, An Expired Member (27) writes:
:) same here, i was waiting for the catch but this is beautiful...whats more beautiful than bringing life into the world? and any-who, i got a thing for baby girls, they're just so precious, if this was non-fiction, congradulations :) *alone*


On Tuesday August 15th, 2006, addicted_angel (27) writes:
I agree I was waiting axiously to get kicked in the stomach but it never came, and I'm glad- very nice write-Addicted


On Tuesday August 15th, 2006, The Fool (970) writes:
This was just beautiful for a second there I thought it would end in tragedy but you took it to the best, your incredible ~Gothic



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