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Drifting through this Lonely Sea

Think of me as
I drift along

Losing sense of
where I belong

Do you care
where I go?

If not, then why
did you tell me so?

Let me linger
through this hell

If anyone asks
I'll never tell

My memory will enter
into your mind

But my body
you will never find

It drifted away
with the flowing stream

To lands that don't
even exist in YOUR dreams

Written July 4, 2006
in Chicago, on the Metra

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On Wednesday July 12th, 2006, The Fool (1003) writes:

This was just incredible, it drifted me into your head and made images crop up ~nightly

On Saturday July 8th, 2006, heartdripsblack (758) writes:

very well done.

On Wednesday July 5th, 2006, Dancing_Monkey (1825) writes:

I agree with the lovely paper flowers

On Wednesday July 5th, 2006, dp_whipping_girl (406) writes:

i like the gentle tiny stanzas spaced apart, they flow like waves, and that really gives the sensation of the sea you write of; well done; very sorrowful and crushing too. ~pf

On Wednesday July 5th, 2006, An Expired Member (38) writes:

huh... very depressing, but nicely put. i like the drifing body part. ~allie, the blackest rose

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