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"My brush with death today" by Estrella Destrozada

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I found death amongst the grass today
perched atop a fallen weed
with thinning wings
and mangled legs

and all I could do was look




what happens when we're found like that
our lifeless bodies laying upon a surface
blending in with all of the decay
that surrounds the aura

of a diminishing hope for survival



I do not wish to fade from existence
but only from reality
the sadness that ensued upon my
discovery today has only finalized

my dreams of escaping this death-ridden world





Written June 12, 2006




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On Friday June 16th, 2006, Mathesix (67) writes:
I agree with sunflower girl.. this is probably your best work.. i like the metaphors used...very nice! -josh


On Wednesday June 14th, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1136) writes:
this is my favorite of all your works i have read..poignant and thought provoking, seamless and a dark joy to read.."our lifeless bodies laying upon a surface blending in with all of the decay that surrounds the aura of a diminishing hope for survival" wo


On Wednesday June 14th, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1136) writes:
*wonderful write.


On Tuesday June 13th, 2006, dp_whipping_girl (406) writes:
interesting perspective, and great thought provoking piece! i kinda agree with Savannah, maybe it was me on that weed. ~pf


On Monday June 12th, 2006, Savannah (290) writes:
Wonderful. I really enjoyed reading this. It almost describes ME that you found perched atop a fallen weed.


On Monday June 12th, 2006, icebat (5) writes:
awesome write, i often contemplate the small creatures of the world myself. and in the end, we all end up as mere dust.



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