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"Waiting for a Poem" by Estrella Destrozada

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staring at the paper
resting right before my eyes

my thoughts too jumbled to pen
which comes as no surprise

try to plot the theme in mind
of my up and coming lines

but it comes out as a forced,
kind of not-so-quite right rhymes

this normally only happens
when my head has gone astray

and the in- has joined the -sane
fading my sight to a gray

blurred out visions everywhere
every turn, every stare

panicked voices surround sound
my body lifted off the ground

layed to rest upon a bed
but don't you worry; i'm not dead

just calmly waiting to return
back to you and share what i've learned

i dreamt of places so insincere
that no one has ever lingered here

frightening voices slice through my ears
as it seems i've been here for years and years

NO! don't come, i need no help
you may have heard a ghostly yelp

but please trust me i shall not lie
my body's alive, but my soul, it cries

the tremors pulsing through my veins
contain no poisons but only stains

stains of old who've passed on through
this gravely place as i am too

the Land of Darkness i've entered now
and yes, of course, i know just how

but please don't make me tell you now, it's much too much to bear
the time will come and i'll warn you it is far greater than any scare...



to be continued....


written Feb. 24-May 9, 2006



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On Thursday May 11th, 2006, veingo (586) writes:
Yes, like Bethany said, it has a kind of a sinnister sense of humor to it. Frighteningly fun. ^V^


On Wednesday May 10th, 2006, Ainsof (1862) writes:
waiting... very much so waiting to see how your land of darkness compares to see what songlike woes you may share; the reads almost like a parady... like a Door's tune torn between sound and semantics


On Wednesday May 10th, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1123) writes:
whimsical and insane at the same time..i do love how you manage to combine the two. a riverfall of words, capsizing each moment like a fallen sailboat. mesmerizing write, sammi.


On Tuesday May 9th, 2006, Ezimo (262) writes:
Wow this was very good i loved it. I can't wait to see the rest.


On Tuesday May 9th, 2006, The Fool (970) writes:
Wow Sammie you still do it, this was just insanity upon insanity I want to explore you're mind to see what goes on in there it would be frightening but very beautiful at the same time. This just sucked me in until I was dry like I was a liquid


On Tuesday May 9th, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2404) writes:
to be continued..this spooky air of Poe-edged haunting, like a ghost draft throguh an openn window on the quill of an old pen - magical.



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