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"Conversation with [Jessie]" by Estrella Destrozada

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"You have no inspiration." says the voice inside my head
It tells me I am lost in my fears of utter dread
Convulsing with the spasms of worry and anxiety
Realizing I will never fit right into the society
"I do not like the way this is going." says the voice again
What should I do? I answer to you, the voice inside my brain
"Do not expose my secrets, as I've told to you before.
I am your burden alone and will not be pushed out the door."
I know that you are mine alone and that you will not leave
but I must release some part so I do not live in grieve.
"No one will believe you, so you should not even try.
They've become so accustomed to the times I make you
cry. You are just a bore and nuisance to their lives
that they find any excuse to sneak away and grow and thrive.
Your 'loved ones' only love you because you are so needy of them.
They know that if they leave you it's your life they will condemn."
No, no, you may speak the truth, but please don't make me hear it.
I already know these things, but I do not want to believe it.
Why won't you go away and leave me as I am? You're the reason
I can not relax and enjoy myself as Just Sam.
I do not want you! I do not need you! Why won't you please just DIE!
"Haha, you can not kill me unless you shoot yourself through the eye."

......

-BOOM!-
-SPLATTER-

......
the END





Written March 13, May 1, May 8, 2006



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On Tuesday May 9th, 2006, Pitch Black Heart (24) writes:
FUCK...i have a couple crazy poems like this...it happens and it sucks...but beautiful writing


On Tuesday May 9th, 2006, Estrella Destrozada (230) writes:
i believe that i will write a part two, or a continuation with an alternate ending...it's just that sometimes it feels that's the only way to make her go away...


On Monday May 8th, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1123) writes:
i meant to comment on this earlier. i keep on clicking on it, and rereading..as if hoping that somehow, the words will come. i'm not sure quite what to say. the ending hit me, but not as quite as the beginning. it's a tricky piece to comment on.


On Monday May 8th, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1123) writes:
this is one of your best, even though i, personally, didn't care for the ending, i think it had to be said..sort of to complete the piece, so there's nothing i would change if i were you. it's well organized and structured, and haunting almost..


On Monday May 8th, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1123) writes:
it sort of chilled me to read it, and in such a personal piece, i respect you for putting this out there. this was outstanding, and frightening in it's veracity of self. amazing write, love.


On Monday May 8th, 2006, Bloodofdeadpoets (70) writes:
trully a brilliant work but i wonder who i owe the credit of this masterpiece to you or jessie but either way credit is definatly do again brilliant work, thanks for sharing


On Monday May 8th, 2006, Estrella Destrozada (230) writes:
i suppose the credit would go to both, though we are both inside the same person....Jessie is the name my mom wanted to name me....i thought it best (ironic, "best"...)


On Monday May 8th, 2006, The Fool (970) writes:
OoO scary. Well I don't like her so far she's eviL!!!!!!!!!!!!!


On Monday May 8th, 2006, Estrella Destrozada (230) writes:
i say, welcome to my other half [Jessie]...she lives among my inner walls tucked inside my mind...


On Monday May 8th, 2006, The Fool (970) writes:
*Sobs* this was just insane, *Huggles you and kisses* I love you doll face, this was just beautifully sad, and made me bleed sorrow.



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