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terror plagues my mind
as I search for the escape
from the entity behind me
always chasing in my wake
*
my frantic tears are like
acid to my cheeks
as the burning perspiration
eats away and makes me weak
*
I clamor to take hold
of the silver stake at hand
as the creature brushes on me,
his power I mustn't withstand
*
his stench is putrid evil
ravished with fumes of greed
as he clasps me closer to him
I believe he is what I need

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"Succomb to me, o daughter
Let your spirit join with mine
We will reign the worlds together
Let your fire out to shine!"

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I erupt with breaths of sulfur
leaking smoke out through my eyes
I know he's now within me
as I scream regretful cries

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"How could you do this to me!
You deceitful demon of tempt!
My soul is my own temple
not even YOU are exempt!"

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With that, I plunged the stake
into my deepest core
I listen to the screechings
of the devil I once bore

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At last my will is free
and my soul will continue on
as I take revenge on those
who thought they'd already won......




...to be continued...





Written 03-17-06, 04-09-06



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On Monday April 10th, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1160) writes:
well. this was very vivid and poignant. i thought it could have used more images, but i loved the way the stanzas flowed and sort of read perfectly, like a song. i can't wait for part two. *hugs*


On Monday April 10th, 2006, The Fool (1003) writes:
You ahve my heart forever Sammie, I love this it just abused me with your emotions. My dear to walk in your shoes for just a moment tis a great honor


On Sunday April 9th, 2006, Shadow Rapture (225) writes:
Well paced stanzas add to a darkly minstrel effect. Im not taking a walk with you into the woods at night...!


On Sunday April 9th, 2006, Ezimo (266) writes:
This is a great song..A song of evil and hate..I love it



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