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"I'd go to the Moon if only for You [R.I.P. My Darling Keeley]" by Estrella Destrozada

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This is dedicated to the most amazing, beautiful girl that I have ever met in my life. May she rest in peace after that terrible, tragic night.

Rest in Peace, Taylor Keeley Combs 05/27/89-06/28/07





I feel the rain upon my heart
unable to wash away the hurt
*
pitter-patter it drops and scatters
while everything around me begins to shatter
*
slower and slower the minutes tick by
screaming at me and making me cry
*
I cry out to you, awaiting your sound
yet still you are nowhere to be found
*
But I know that we shall meet again
someday we will, and we can forget about then
*
Keeley, my heart, my light and my soul
I've absolutely lost all sense of [mind] control
*
I miss you baby, I'll see you soon
if I have to I'll fly to the end of the moon





Written June 30, 2007



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On Wednesday September 19th, 2007, ShatteredFaith (235) writes:
i agree with bella! Dont ever forget to learn. this is so beautiful and heart felt. i wish there was something i could do to lesson the pain. you know i would take all your pain away anyday


On Tuesday July 10th, 2007, Revisable Retina (149) writes:
wow this is a very nice write.. it is truly sad when you miss someone and every bit of you your body soul and heart is screaming for that one person.. i am sorry..


On Tuesday July 10th, 2007, deadrosesrdust (131) writes:
right now this really hits home- i found out yesterday 1 of my childhood friends died in car accident- beautiful way u put the feeling in words for words r only words til u put them together then they mean something. sorry for yourloss as well.


On Tuesday July 10th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1140) writes:
i actually hope you dont see her soon... but its through great loss can we reflect on what we have done with our own life and plan on how to be happy and not waste what precious time we have... do not forget to learn. and for her sake, do not forget.


On Tuesday July 10th, 2007, Freebird (642) writes:
Beautiful. I'm sorry for your loss.


On Tuesday July 10th, 2007, GreyDividing (194) writes:
Heart-felt in a lovely way. You will see each other again.



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