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I wrote this 2 days before my best friend died. I don't know what that means, but it scares the hell out of me. All I feel is numb.



Misery surprised us all
the days she took that fatal fall
She wanted more than life so real
the numbness then was all she could feel
Holding on to memories
She began to drift among the seas
Of painful waves and pure disdain
always in her head it rained
Preoccupied her mind constantly became
as nothing was ever gonna be the same
So then one day she left for good
Saying goodbye was nothing she could
Through the trees and fallen leaves
She wound her way toward destiny
Finally she reached the end
As reality began to bend
Away from her and all she knew
Her minutes then were much too few
After staring all around
she took that step toward where she was bound
Down, down, down through air and space
A smile grew across her face
She watched the sky until she died
While us unaware didn't even cry





*She was the most beautiful creature I had ever seen. I loved her since the day I first saw her. She was loved by everyone, except her own blood family.*



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On Monday July 2nd, 2007, Mylissa (1088) writes:
I am very sorry for your loss. Your emotion pours from this. You're stunning.


On Sunday July 1st, 2007, Freebird (669) writes:
Im sorry for your loss. This was a very deep poem that you wrote. Be thankful for the time you had with her and never forget it


On Saturday June 30th, 2007, Err0r (581) writes:
This is so eerie, and I'm so sorry for your loss hun. Stay strong.


On Saturday June 30th, 2007, ShatteredFaith (235) writes:
it seems like u had a strong connection with her and though her death was tragic the poem you wrote gave u insight into her mind so you could understand why she did it.


On Saturday June 30th, 2007, Nuri (194) writes:
The death of someone is something one really can't recover from.I'm sorry for your loss...It's so bizarre how you wrote this 2 days before she died. It's like a premonition



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