sounds like a prayer....one i hope fervently to be answered

Too cool. Something I've never really tried to get the grasp of but you nailed it. Sweet. ~Ship!

absolutely gorgeous. i see and feel this beauty. you have a magical touch with words.

..in their seperate breaths of tongue, these seem to be quite symmetrical..I am not sure whether that was intentional, or if they were written as seperate visions.. but each one, alone and, then brought into circumspect together.. rather compelling.

Well done, I must say.. the second haiku struck me as the most enchanting.. in a distanced sort of fashion.. thank you.