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                  fold

ribs pressed to the peak

      muscles wearingold


sleek

in atrophy


rain escaped the sea

sooth the ocean


rocking motion


worn grooves

              wearing


ancient camels staring

wanting to believe


humps are the mountains

that their

people need


she spreads her seeds

while arms of foliage


r

u

b

        rocks to

seduction

                  breaking


can she finally see

          exactly


what was

  promised

not to be


necklace of shelter

bringing the cactus

swim closer

under the earth


air flooding waters

                          fired


their wells

replenished


regurgitate for our birds

born without wings


told that

they are human

with a scorpion sting


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On Saturday November 12th, 2005, Jonas (878) writes:
glimpses into human nature pressed flat on the mobius of these words


On Saturday March 6th, 2004, Lynaes (1121) writes:
Amazing work, I loved the structure and the flow, and there are some stunning lines in there. Particularly "rain escaped the sea". Awesome work. ~L


On Saturday March 6th, 2004, stitch (78) writes:
love the formatting, it kind of represents the cold desert i see in my head from reading this. all spread out and barren...a feeling of emptiness and need...excellent


On Friday March 5th, 2004, capt_funguy (993) writes:
unbelievable .... with a scorpion sting ... set me back in my seat .... once again ... this is art ... funguy


On Friday March 5th, 2004, purr_verse (1427) writes:
gorgeous, gorgeous work... what an ending; beautiful format and such a sharpsway cadence within this... purr



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