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Winter from Corrosion

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obsession
arrived

winter pain

when her sleep
finally escorted

icicles
from her warm
blanket covers

hearing without even the faintest voice

i answered back

as

the Burgundy rose she pressed to her clenchedkiss

are you still
succulent
as the one who came to enter my dreams
inyourname

sweetSlut

yoursuccluent means fresh like the cherry you keep forme

deep inside your seed

fermenting

i am /your lovE/... when i found you

ikeptand

discovered the juice for life

Corrosion
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"please stay fresh my sweet ... dont ever become bitter"

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On Wednesday January 14th, 2004, Exodus (210) writes:

Ya...it was very soft, and spacey...mysterious....reminded me of the movie Solaris...Nice write!

On Wednesday January 14th, 2004, stitch (78) writes:

original layout definitly adds to the flow. in this case less is definitly more. a sense of quiet intimacy and unfettered beauty is reflected in your words. i enjoyed this immensely

On Wednesday January 14th, 2004, capt_funguy (993) writes:

when i read this , it read as a whisper , or a very quiet voice - like a subliminal secret .... very cool piece - funguy

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