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I lather the soap into my breasts.
Rubbing the firm round moons.
I feel no arousal; this is my routine.
I swerve down my tummy, I feel
goosebumps starting to ignite. My
body shivers. I still feel calm as I
clean myself off. I reach into my
valley, and soothe my clit and feel
a moan escape my throat.

Desire blooms like the morning sun.
I press up against the shower wall,
and I feel my body corrode into mocules
of want, of need. I feverishly rub myself
feeling my cum drizzle down my legs like
rain. I press myself further into the wall
imaginging you are here. I wish you were
here to watch me.

To stare deeply into my pores, to steal my
soul and make me burn with desire. My pace
quickens, my heart stutters. I lean forward
and touch my hand to the ground. Placing
my fingers deep inside my ass. Roaming as
I imagine you fucking me like this. Pushing
your aching, your wanting, your needing into
my tight hot spot. I whimper. Feeling more
soaked by my cum.

It seems wetter, hotter, nastier, purer to feel
my juices run free. I let out soft pants trying
to hold my excitement in. Trying to keep from
tumbling down into tIhe well of ecstasy where
i'll never come back again. I can imagine your
palms on my ass cheeks, pinching them. Fondling.
Weighing your options as you stroke hard and
fast.

And roll your hips slow and sturdy. My head begins
spinning only you make sin feel like art. Only you
make me feel like I'm a slut. I lean my shoulder against
the wall and press my cheek onto the sweat soaked
barrier, and I place my other hand into my depths.
I rove faster and harder, needier. Dirtier. Feeling my
knees shudder underneath this excitement.

I'm so hot. So, god damn hot that I'm burning to a fever.
I'm screaming out for you to be here riding me like
my emotions aren't real. My thighs burn with my passion.
My body shakes and trembles. I cry out your name in
whimpery moans. Slowing and spinning faster. I wish
to clamp my nipples, to pull my clit into the bite of
the snake.

I feel my last orgasm as I imagine your hot seed
penetrating me everywhere at once. I want to grow
sticky, to grow dirtier, even in this shower. So, I
can feel that I pushed you to the limits. I leave my
hands docile at my opened Eden. Feeling rivulets
stream down my legs. My eyes are squeezed tightly.
Why do you do this too me?

Why does every thought consist of me bending
to your will. I smirk and climax once more.

Knowing I damn well wanted it this way.

Fucked.



Author's Note:

Be respectful or don't bother



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On Monday July 28th, 2008, demonofthefall (24) writes:
ummm i think that was a bit too hot to be reading at work if ya get what i mean lol.


On Saturday July 26th, 2008, rage_addict (18) writes:
this was hot!


On Tuesday May 20th, 2008, noonenothingnone (34) writes:
nice one..


On Tuesday May 20th, 2008, Mistwalker (5) writes:
i don't know why you are taking so nuch crap on this poem. poetry is about expressing yourself in your own way. if someone doesn't like it, fine. but don't tell someone that the way they expessed themselves is wrong. I thought that it was great.


On Friday May 9th, 2008, Ainsof (1814) writes:
This puts a song in my head... some pop song and I don't know who sings it but it's not good.


On Friday May 9th, 2008, evolve (2232) writes:
You can be sensual without being vulgar, in my opinion. This? This was vulgar.


On Friday May 9th, 2008, The Fool (1005) writes:
My intentions weren't sensuality, just raw animal desire


On Friday May 9th, 2008, evolve (2232) writes:
You can show desire without being vulgar. Also: this needs to have a disclaimer for eighteen or older. I wouldn't want my kids reading this.


On Friday May 9th, 2008, The Fool (1005) writes:
But, to make you happy I will put it as soon as I get room to.


On Friday May 9th, 2008, The Fool (1005) writes:
You have kids? *raises eyebrow*


On Saturday May 10th, 2008, evolve (2232) writes:
I almost did...


On Saturday May 10th, 2008, The Fool (1005) writes:
almost?


On Friday May 9th, 2008, Ainsof (1814) writes:
oo show me hun.. ?


On Friday May 9th, 2008, evolve (2232) writes:
Maybe I'll write something sensual.


On Friday May 9th, 2008, Ainsof (1814) writes:
please do!


On Thursday May 8th, 2008, Ainsof (1814) writes:
I had a hard time with the choice of words... too brazen for my taste... the open Eden hurt me, but that may be a desired effect.


On Thursday May 8th, 2008, the-rapist (338) writes:
it's hard for me to grasp the sensuality when tummy and clit are in the same paragraph.


On Friday May 9th, 2008, The Fool (1005) writes:
Again, I'm not going for sensuality with this piece. Just the aching want of another person.


On Thursday May 8th, 2008, MindRape (889) writes:
respect is a matter of opinion...for instance i think i'm respectful by informing you that you lost me about the end of the 2nd paragraph...I really did try to stay interested but...eh...It's not that it's not good...it is...but its not.....hmm what's the word I'm looking for here?.....it's not seductive. It's just descriptive. Ask anyone who knows me. I respect raw and bold, more than you could understand but....


On Thursday May 8th, 2008, MindRape (889) writes:
I guess I just would have written this differntly....and to me this seems very inexperienced...maybe even forced? but respectfully bold and raw. I am torn on how I might critique this as I love the "In-your_face" style (so me) and yet on this subject I am more coy and "want-a-piece-of-candy-little-boy?" style....ignore me I am nobody and my opinion means nothing


On Wednesday May 7th, 2008, Marionette Mars (513) writes:
this is hot. fucking HOTTTl just awesome. -mars


On Wednesday May 7th, 2008, Mab (1028) writes:
wow...this really got me fired up! Your descriptions have such depth...I need that in an erotic write to keep me interested, and honey, you did that and then some ;)


On Wednesday May 7th, 2008, After hours (569) writes:
And that name you called was "After hours, After hours.....sorry, I trailed off around there, but rejoined shortly after, ok, enough of funny buggers....That was a brilliant piece of erotica consisting of surreal fantasy compiled into very real reality from a readers point, I have to fav it... It was a written piece but delivered a visual, it's not easy to turn words into actual vision, and for me thats what you accomplished, well done.


On Wednesday May 7th, 2008, Dark Goth (64) writes:
DAMN! I wish there were more writers like you that wrote stuff like this. This turns me on just reading it. You can't expect to not get inappropriate comments after a poem like this. sorry.


On Wednesday May 7th, 2008, Lipstick Whore (414) writes:
This i get....nice work.


On Tuesday May 6th, 2008, the-rapist (338) writes:
i say if you put it out there, take the shots-only those of course that matter to you:) personally i'm not that into the erotic poetry, unless it's slowly erotic, but I respect those that just lay it out. (no pun intended)


On Tuesday May 6th, 2008, The Fool (1005) writes:
Well thank you for your thoughts*smiles*


On Tuesday May 6th, 2008, Caliraphy (260) writes:
Oh... Yeah! *closes bathroom door and stares* This was great :D


On Tuesday May 6th, 2008, Riddles Moon (645) writes:
O_o i need to jog after reading this. sucks wanting and needing someone like this. but its so addictive at the sametime. great write


On Tuesday May 6th, 2008, the-rapist (338) writes:
you can disable comments if you want to not worry about it. poetry thats a bit racy always provokes interesting feedback to say the least. g


On Tuesday May 6th, 2008, The Fool (1005) writes:
I know it is, I'm intrigued about peoples opinions but when you push it too far, I just ask for a little respect, I wish I still had the option of deleting comments sometimes


On Tuesday May 6th, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (409) writes:
Getting dirty in a shower sounds so fun to say... This was intense! *salutes*


On Tuesday May 6th, 2008, the-rapist (338) writes:
I'm not getting the author's note. Are you referring to feedback? thanks-g


On Tuesday May 6th, 2008, The Fool (1005) writes:
Yes, I am. had some issues with inappropriate comments on my erotica



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