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"Dreamland" by Ozymandias

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I sit here and force these words onto paper,

Yeht yrt ot tsiser yb gniraeppa sdrawkcab.

My perspective of reality has been changing,

This world lacks the beauty I once saw.

I see the flaws of humanity,

But I alone am helpless to mend our kind.

The worlds inside my mind seem so real,

Who is to say they’re not?

A distorted dimension of surrealism inside my head,

Fabricated from one too many lonely nights,

That fall short of the medically recommended amount of sleep.

One of these days,

My mind will escape from it’s container.

No longer bound by the tenacious gravity,

It will float away from this ruin.

And when I am gone,

I will be free to live peacefully in my dreamland.




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On Thursday July 20th, 2006, evolve (2260) writes:
You have a voice that is soft, yet insistent. Liquid smooth write. Beautifully done.


On Saturday June 10th, 2006, LostInDespair (197) writes:
I've noticed a repeating theme in your writing... But I don't have to tell you what that is. Nice work. ~Lost


On Tuesday May 30th, 2006, ShardsofSilence (327) writes:
Sincere. Soft. and lucid. Your way with words is astounding


On Thursday May 11th, 2006, mywristshurt (512) writes:
oh yeah.. what a way to put your words on how people are so unperfect..


On Tuesday May 9th, 2006, StrippedToThe Bone (32) writes:
truly...tuely....I say this....you are an INCEDIBLE writer!


On Tuesday May 9th, 2006, The Fool (970) writes:
Wow tis was just incredible, you did an awesome job*Breathes*


On Tuesday May 9th, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2404) writes:
a kind of semi-surrealism yet with almost strange lucid thoughts seemingly clutched at from all angles and then pieced together to unite the puzzle picture and find what you see to be pleasing.


On Monday May 8th, 2006, Estrella Destrozada (230) writes:
wow...this is a near description of my dreamland, which i call my "Happy Place"...your views are much like mine, and mine are much like yours. terrific


On Monday May 8th, 2006, Estrella Destrozada (230) writes:
I really love the backward line...it is so true...


On Monday May 8th, 2006, Collective Amnesia (235) writes:
i liked the ending, very hopeful...gave it the touch it needed, eventhough i do think one person can make a difference, good job ~Tamara



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